Monks at Paro Dzong

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• CedarBough (170)
• [2006-03-27 9:24]

Focus seems iffy, but what would make the biggest improvement here is if you got down a little, include more of the interesting temple wall behind and more of their bodies. Also it'd be better if they were a little more relaxed... but sometimes there is nothing you can do about that across the language/culture barriers.

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• kevinos (5764)
• [2006-03-27 10:07]
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Lovely composition, wonderful colour. You have captured a wonderful moment. A lower {oV might have been even better, showing more of the amazing mural and less of the road. Anyway conrratulations on a great picture.(Hey, I have done a workshop, just playing around to see what I might have done, if it were mine.)