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pboehringer (770) 2008-01-17 7:31
first of all welcome to TE! I hope you will have a lot of fun here.
You did an interesting start here. I know jackfruit very well back from my childhood that I spent in Brazil. This might be the first post of this fruit here at TE and it deserves a note. You really should place a note at every single post. You can write about the fruit, about why you took this shot, what the difficulties were to get the shot, the technical aspects or anything else that goes along with it.
Personally I would have not included a human build background. The tree and the jackfriut in the foreground do not relate with that blue house. Getting closer with camera to the fruit so that we can see more detail and at the same time haveing an attractive background would enhance the presentation.
Hope this is useful.