End of the day... Photo

Photographer’s Note

What appeared to be a mother and daughter take a river taxi at the end of a smoggy Dhaka day.

I like the angle of the boatman, the way the girl's white dress made this one something less than a full silhouette.

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AdrianW (2243) 2003-05-05 16:33

Nice shot! I think it could be improved though, have a look at my Workshop and see what you think ;-)

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CedarBough (74) 2003-05-05 19:42

Can't resist critiquing this shot. Bob, this shot would be ever so much better if the boat wasn't in the center of the image. I'd say crop closer on the bottom and the back, and if it was possible to shoot again, to compose with the back of the paddle almost at the edge of the frame, and the bottom of the frame at the end of the reflection, with more on top and in front. It would seem less like a bug stuck to a page with a pin if it was out of the center....

GunDawg (6) 2003-05-05 20:46

Hey Bob .... Take me with ya, when you go back to reshoot this pic. I did like the rework from workshop, but ... think we should put a smokey old motor on the back.