Photographer’s Note
Boys look through the window as I take photos of others in the village
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paulalex32
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(4) 2007-07-04 21:20
Hi Adrienne,
This is a nice photo. Good composition but I think it could be framed a little better. Perhaps if you cropped out the left side a little. Or, perhaps, crop out the top boy altogether and keep the hand on the left. Cheers, Paul.
portojo
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(169) 2007-10-30 4:52
Hello. Very very interesting composition (specially the eyes). African boys are really wonderful for the cameras...
Thanks
Javier
Photo Information
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Copyright: Adrienne Harmon (AdrienneClaire)
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 103 W: 57 N: 115]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(718) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-06-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: CANON 300D REBEL
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Travelogue: 17 villages in Togo
- Date Submitted: 2007-07-02 20:33
Viewed: 1241
Points: 4
