The rain is comming

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• mikolaj_kawa (8999)
• [2008-04-30 5:48]

Hello Tobias! Very interesting landscape. Good point of view. Very good composition. Nice lightness, very nice colors. Good capture. Original work. Well done!

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• tober (1141)
• [2008-04-30 5:58]

Hi Tobias, that's an amazing landscape. Your composition is quite rich with the dry tree branch, three massive rocks on the left and typical savanna trees. Well done ! Tolga

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• jurek1951 (10420)
• [2008-04-30 6:26]

Hallo Tobias,
Good composition with beautiful colors and cloudy sky,beautiful landscape of a beautiful place,
Georg

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• dareco (6060)
• [2008-04-30 6:29]

Beautiful colors!! Lovely landscape. I like the rock. Nice detail. TFS

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• brandstaetter (5952)
• [2008-04-30 7:56]

Hallo Tobias,
diese Steine sind wirklich für die Ewigkeit. Tolle Stimmung , die Du da eingefangen hast. Respekt!
LG christian

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• scobert (5301)
• [2008-04-30 8:58]

Hello Tobias,
This is excellent photography, Tobias! I like your composition with the forked stick in the foreground and the lighting is beautiful. You do great work!
Stan

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• mark_mk (518)
• [2008-04-30 9:05]
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Hi Toba,
das gefällt mir von der Komposition klasse, die Felsen sind schön links positioniert und der Ast im Vordergrund kreiert eine schöne Tiefe. Schöne Farben und Schärfe. Das einzige was besser sein könnte ist die Tiefenschärfe, die Bäume dahinten sind nicht ganz so scharf, aber das ist ja nicht weiter schlimm.
Der Himmel sieht super aus und die Atmosphäre ist sehr gut, sag mal hat`s eigentlich nur geregnet oder warum hast du so viele "rain" Bilder :-)
Also um Regen zu kriegen hättest nicht nach Tansania fahren müssen, das hättest hier auch gehabt^^
Ne Spaß, also mir gefallen deine Bilder aus Tansania alle ausnahmsloß super und das ist auch so eins, tolle Landschaftsaufnahme! Keep posting.

Greetz
Mark

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• Dyerco (4379)
• [2008-04-30 9:35]

Hi Tobias
The imposing sky and rocks add a mood to this image. Nicely composed and exposed.
Phil

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• JCG (14402)
• [2008-04-30 11:49]

Hi Tobias,

You have a pretty glance to compose your photographs. Still a beautiful sight on this rock and African savanna. The natural colors are very pleasant and harmonious. Beautiful work Tobias, cheer.

With all my friendships of Brittany and a very good evening,

Jean-Charles

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• gracious (7428)
• [2008-04-30 13:08]

Hello Toba,
Nicely placement of the huge rocks in the shot and to show the land with such depth, well done!
good fg perspective in good sharpness, vivid colour and detils
well done once again
best regards
Tony

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• danyy (46956)
• [2008-04-30 15:02]

Bonjour Tobia,
restitution à 100% de la beauté de cet endroit avec des couleurs fortes et un ciel dont tu as rendu tout le caractère.
J'aime beaucoup les lumières ici.
Regards.
Daniel.

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• pablominto (25829)
• [2008-05-01 0:42]

Hello Tobias,
This is a balanced composition, that could be even better if you move your point of view one step to the left side..!
Good sense of depth, and the rock frame the view effectively...
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• snunney (17691)
• [2008-05-01 1:08]

Hello Toba,
An interesting minimalist composition that makes good use of the foreground branch to lead the viewer deeper into the scene. Very good light and natural looking colours. I like the placing of the rocks with their interesting tones and textures on the right. Very good clarity.

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• zmey (3519)
• [2008-05-01 5:25]

hello toba

you have been to some amazing places... nice light and atmosphere and rocks: quite imposing. nice work, friend. keep them coming! :)

cheers,
kristaps

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• pboehringer (16475)
• [2008-05-01 7:46]

Tobias,
almost a minimalist approach and a very good one. You definitively have a keen eye for interesting details. The image is a little bit on the soft side but nothing really bothering to me. All the elements frame the moment well, starting with the dead branch in the foreground, the rocks to the left and finally the marvelous clouds on the top.
Peter

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• Kris_Luxenhofer (99)
• [2008-05-01 8:46]

HEy Toba,
sehr schönes Motiv mit einem guten POV. Auch der Rahmen ist schlicht ung gut.
Viele Grüße,
Kris

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• jhm (61942)
• [2008-05-02 5:16]

Hello Toba,

Composition is very well, through that you placed the big stones nice to the left.
We get to the right, a very depth view with the mountains in background.
Very well done, thanks for sharing.

Have a nice weekend,
John.

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• feather (36861)
• [2008-05-02 14:28]

Now I see the black cloud I can believe the rain is coming. Very well composed image with the stick for foreground interest and depth. The rocks of the kopje makes a perfect frame for the view. Well done
Kath

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• kiwi_explorer (11552)
• [2008-05-02 14:43]

Hi Tobias,
I find the composition very balance ... I like the overall placement of elements. The branch in the foreground is a good inclusion in the foreground ... it points the viewer to the main scene. Well captured and composed with good image quality. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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• cepekdong (3286)
• [2008-05-03 23:42]

eine interessante komp toba ! die dunklen wolken im hintergrund sehen echt super aus ! du haettest vielleicht 2 schritte zurückgehen können, um den baum und den fels nicht so knapp miteinzubeziehen

daniel

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• denisn72 (3227)
• [2008-05-05 12:26]

Hello Tobias
Great idea to include those three huge rocks on the left side as a natural framing. The dark sky up above looks anry. Nice colours and details. Well done!
Best regards
Denis!

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• elihesamian (25639)
• [2008-05-12 5:49]

Hello Toba ,
I missed many of your works (because of my absence )just for commenting but I saw those and randomly selected this one for say a Hello :)
a wild view you show us and I amazed by the kind of the rock here !
also I like the way you composed the scene with the wood in foreground.a well composed shot and very good work,Thanks,
Best Wishes
M