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Young girl hiding her candy


Young girl hiding her candy
Photo Information
Copyright: David Harrington (daveh) (6)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-06
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-29 14:18
Viewed: 861
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This young girl posed for my wife and I in Lushoto, northern Tanzania. She had beautiful eyes and was a natural model. What the shot doesn't reveal is the chaos going on around her, with the kids desperately trying to grab our cameras and get there portraits done!!! I'm fairly new in the art of photography, so i'm not sure about the technical details of the picture, but it's our favourite people shots from our trip to Tanzania.
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Good evening David, and welcome on TE with this superb image of child. The glance and the eyes are extraordinary.

In WS : a framed version
Regards
Marc

Hi David
I love this shot !
Beautiful picture and beautiful model.
How good it is for your first picture on trek earth!
I'll wait for other pictures.
Good evening.
Alexia

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  • jmcl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2465 W: 141 N: 3477] (12356)
  • [2008-02-29 20:04]

Hi David,

Welcome to TE.

Love the eyes ... striking personality ... I think amplified a bit by the colors .. my one suggestion is to crop her off center .. hold your hand up and cover a bit of the image .. I think if you chopped part of the right to place her right on the good old rule of thirds line you will find more focusing power .. even though it sacrifices the most beautiful part of you background greens .. very nice image.

take care,

John

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