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schoolgirl
Photo Information
Copyright: walter van staay (walterke) (8)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Kids from the World Part IV [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-19 17:35
Viewed: 2478
Points: 6
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Hello Walter, this shy girl certainly made a good model for your picture. The wall behind her bring some color to the picture. Very nice.

Réjean

Walter: welcome here to TE. A fine upload although a bit soft. notes and details are always welcome. regards, c

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  • zmey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1373 W: 102 N: 1423] (5514)
  • [2008-01-19 21:11]

hello, walter

warm welcome to TE!

a beautiful entry photo too. pleasant portrait with direct eye contact with your subject. just a tad too centered for my taste. i would crop quite a bit off from the top and the right side, creating an illusion of space the girl is stepping into as well as bringing her closer to the viewer. since the quality of the photo seems good, i think, you could afford it (closer view).

thanks for sharing and welcome again.

kristaps

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