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Old massai woman


Old massai woman
Photo Information
Copyright: Tobias Ortmann (Tobias__Ortmann) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 321 W: 52 N: 446] (1993)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-20
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, EFS 55-250 f/4-5.6 IS
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-06-24 7:55
Viewed: 742
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi te members,
I think this picture will be my last post from my trip in tanzania.After that you will see some of my hometown or the next trips.
I decided to upload this shot because I was very fascinated about the massais culture and their daily life.
I have already posted 2 shots of massais earlier.
Hope you also like this shot.
Best regards
Toba

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Olá Tobias,

Great portrait with amazing colours and the light very well managed.
Excellent details, very well framed and done
TFS and greetings
Filipe

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  • Jeppo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 872 W: 5 N: 900] (6621)
  • [2008-06-24 9:13]

hallo tobias,

tolles expressionvolles bild mit warmen farben und klaren details
gute arbeit
silvio

PS: mfg aus stuttgart°!

Hey Toba,
wow das muss man irgendwie erstmal verarbeiten. Wie die da so leben aber trotdem so alt werden. Meinst du eig. die Frau ist glücklich? Schwer zu sagen.
Zum Bild:
Schönes Portrait, gut positioniert und super Farben und natürlich das Motiv.

Viele Grüße, Kris

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  • JCG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3533 W: 462 N: 5120] (18352)
  • [2008-06-24 10:35]

Hi Tobias,

The sun seems to obstruct it a little !!! Good framing of this Massaï woman. The expressions of her face are well highlighted. Beautiful management of the colors. Thank you for this interesting photograph.

With all my friendships and a very good evening,

Jean-Charles

Hello!
Excellent portrait,beautiful colours,excellent clarity and good sharpness.
Greetings
Tadeusz

Tobias,
glad that you posted this one. The body langauge is a very strong one. A lot of pensative elements here. I wonder what was going through this head while you were taking the shot. A certain disbelieve? Frustration of having another tourist poking a lens into his/ her face? Melancholy about something totally unrelated? ....
The framing is perfect and gives all the right elements to make it a great portrait. The red, partially blurred, skirt in the foreground with the little holes in it is great to give some additional info regaring the vestiment of the person. The fact that it is blurred is good because it doesn't distract the attention of the real attraction - the face.
Th eonly minor problem is the skin's reflection at the forehead. That light source bothers me somewhat and I wonder if a polarizing filter could have taken care of that.
Peter

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1927 W: 53 N: 759] (12481)
  • [2008-06-24 11:18]

A really great portrait!! I love the expression and the colors are very nice. Good detail. TFS and have a great day!

Hello Toba,
Excellent portrait well presented!
A most natural expression from the Massai woman!
the image is sharp with perfect exposure and focus!
well done
cheers
Tony

Hi Tobias,
Excellent shot and great portrait..
Beautiful colours and details.
Well done.
Heorg

T: powerful portrait - expressionless says it all. regards, c

Hallo Tobias. eine alte Massai-Frau. Sie wirkt müde und etwas skeptisch. vielleicht ist sie auch durch das Photoshooting etwas mitgenommen. Interessant sind Kleidung und Schmuck. Interessant was sie sagen würde, wenn sie ihr eigenes Portrait sehen könnte. Viele Grüße, Wolfgang.

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  • Waylim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 631 W: 84 N: 1215] (4347)
  • [2008-06-25 12:29]

They are amazing people, different though, I don't agree with many things they do, but I'm not one to judge. That's was their way of life for generation. It slowly changing. I didn't have too many photo of them, since they don't like to have their photo taken. This one is good, with great clarity and sharpness. Nice strong and saturated colors. Thanks Toba, have a great day, looking forward to see you new post.
Way

Very good portrait of the old lady. You have captured her in a sad mood, or maybe she has a headache. You also have captured excellent colour and detail of her adornments. the predominantly red clothing of the Maasai is very eyecatching. Well done
Kath

Hi Toba,

good portrait, as you say it must be fascinating their culture, I like your picture, good work,

Regards

Sergio

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  • verge Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 464 W: 79 N: 188] (1233)
  • [2008-06-26 18:57]

really nice portraint. the woman's expression is is very strong. i can just stare on her and think of many things on what is on her mind, really a good capture. well done....brgds

verge

Die Strenge in dem Blick macht das Foto faszinierend. Die angelegte Hand verstärtkt diesen Effekt noch. Sehr schönes Portrait.
Viele Grüße,
Achim

Hey Toba!
Hello again!
So. Das Motiv gefällt mir sehr gut! Guter Blickwinkel! Die Farben sind auch gut obwohl das Bild für meinen Geschmack ein bisschen mehr Kontrast vertragen könnte. Aber vielleicht ist das einfach die Sonne, die die Massai-Frau blendet...
Der Rahmen passt!

lg
Phil

Hi Toba!
Geiles Bild, sehr ausdrucksstark, genau im richtigen Moment aufgenommen.
Der Gesichtsausdruck ist super, und der Bildaufbau gefällt mir sehr gut.
Super Schärfe, gute Farben und ein passender Rahmen.
Grüße,
Jonas

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1659 W: 118 N: 2975] (10070)
  • [2008-06-28 2:07]

hi Tobias

Very strong color of the dress to contrast with skin tone here to make it striking. The woman's expression is also very unique with her hand over the face to make it as natural without posing. This tribe is one of the world's intrique even shown in movies. Good portrait shot well composed.

tfs, bill

Hello Tobias,

This is a good portrait with fine details!
I cannot for my life interpret the expression but it is most likely on the sad side of the scale...
Well framed and eye-catching colours!

Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12812 W: 271 N: 17359] (69911)
  • [2008-07-01 2:54]

Hello Tobias,

You know that I a very great fan am of your splendid photgraphy.
Again a wonderful portrait of this massai, the expression of the face is not at once friendly, but the decoration around the nek and ears are very well.
Very well done, TFS.

Tobias, I wish you a very lovely vacation,
John.

Hi Tobias,
the trip in Tanzania was very interesting not only for you but for us, too! Thank you very much for these special shots coming from this country.
This is a very good portrait. With this focal length and using the IS, you obtained a quite clear image!

Warm regards,
Athanasios.

Hi Tobias,
A very impressive portrait. Its colours are superb but above all, you captured a very enigamtic expression.
I wonder what she was thinking...
Well done,
Regards,
Marianne

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  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9687 W: 445 N: 15907] (56252)
  • [2008-07-06 10:35]

I like your speed photo's Tobia,
but I go for this very good portrait of this old women, good, photo, orginal and good quality, good photojob here, have a nice evening.
gr. jaap

Hi, Tobias -

A very good, expressive portrait. I am a little surprised you were able to get such a candid shot of the Maasai; usually they are much more aware of cameras and pose - and charge - for them.

The WS does improve this a little bit in some ways, but it also blew out the forehead.

Best,
Dan

Hello Tobias,
Nice photo with a fantastic contrast of red
colour well composed and absolutely traditional...This portrait is marvellous
from the best photographer painter..
Excellent details in an excellent shot..
Costantino

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