Storm & kids

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• roamermark (1579)
• [2006-05-11 15:03]
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Hi Hubert,
an interesting shot. I love the general composition and the threatening sky on the horizon. Maybe a tighter crop focusing more on the one boy. Also this is a bit too contrasty for me....I tried I little workshop, I hope you don't mind.

Great scene though

cheers
Mark

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• Moratallo (149)
• [2006-05-11 15:25]

Hi Hubert,

I like your photo because:
- saturation of colours.
- contrast.
- figure on the left.

Thanks for sharing

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• matfranz (55)
• [2006-05-11 15:53]

Great picture. good composition. I like the colors.

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• limule (2905)
• [2006-05-11 16:02]

Hello hubert, a wonderful picture with all these blue and grey nuances. The impact of the colors is giving s particular mood to it. I went to Jambiani beach and I remember quite the same mood, with a lot of wind before the storm and all these kids playing around. Nice atmosphere.

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• fijiphil (1332)
• [2006-05-11 17:37]

It'S a shame you cut off the head of the boy with his back to us behind the ngalawa. Also the ngalawa behind it is half cut off. Otherwise a great photo with lots of life and a story to tell. TFS.

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• Amandine (1024)
• [2006-05-12 15:16]

Hi Hubert, it's quite a strange pic, the sky contrats with the see in an amazing way...the luminosity is a surprise too. All the elemnt get on well togheter anyway and the all is harmonious. Well done