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The oldest church in East Africa


The oldest church in East Africa
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Copyright: zhiyong xiong (xzyong) (103)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2003-05-23 4:18
Viewed: 1374
Points: 3
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very nice colours,sharpness is needed. the line in the middle disturbs a bit, and u'll need to crop the black thing on the right side (easily fixed).besides that I liked it.

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  • Darren Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1561 W: 120 N: 1060] (6803)
  • [2003-05-23 10:44]

The toning here looks great, it really emphasizes the sky and its contrast with the church. However, the shot is very soft, and the church appears to be leaning. I also would have been tempted to clone out the powerline that cuts in front of the church. Maybe you could have brought up the brightness a little as well??

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  • Aegean Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1423 W: 14 N: 745] (2559)
  • [2003-05-23 15:33]

Nice shot...The power line disturbs a lot though...I think that in b&w with sepia tone will be much better than the original color shot...

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