Photographer’s Note
It is road between Wadi Halfa and Khartoum.
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Paker
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(2636) 2005-03-15 13:29
Hi -
Good image.
However, if the bus was closer to us it would be more interesting to the viewer. Too much unecessary sand up front.
Did the bus brake?
regards,
Xtof
V3_Intruder
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(329) 2005-03-15 14:30
Nice picture!
Great composition, but everthing is just to centered. I also agree with Paker, for the sand in front. On my side, I think we could crop a part of the sky too. I made a workshop to show you theses changes, I hope you like it!
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Photo Information
- Copyright: Arne Uusjarv (arne) (590)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-11-00
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Olympus Camedia C740UZ
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2005-03-15 13:25
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Points: 4
