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Ostrich herd


Ostrich herd
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Copyright: Ryno Sauerman (ryno) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 746 W: 0 N: 192] (3526)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-10 4:04
Viewed: 1199
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This cheerful old man ekes out a living as an ostrich herd and firewood gatherer in the Little Karoo semi-desert region of South Africa. His bicycle seems to be his most prized possession.
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  • Gustaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2326 W: 702 N: 187] (19160)
  • [2006-07-10 4:09]

Hallo dear friend!
Very interesting person and interesting view!
Marek

Congratulations: I like this portrait very much...
It really gives the impression of his life and work...

Only one minor thing: the fence - I'm not sure but maybe the portrait would look better without this fence: but of course it would require in the beginning much more effort to do it :)

Hi Ryno,
This is a great example of good environmental portraiture; showing the man in the context of the environment where he lives and works. Its so much more effective than a straight head and shoulders portrait would have been.
You've found an appealing looking subject and caught a great expression - top marks from me.
Cheers,
Ben

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  • vedra Gold Star Critiquer [C: 567 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-07-10 13:23]

Hi Ryno,
A nice man you found indeed. The guy is capturing so much attention that a bit blurry background is just what he deserves - nothing else matters but him and his bicycle :)
Vedrana

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 845 W: 72 N: 991] (4869)
  • [2006-07-10 20:03]

A good photo with good composition. A nice portrait of the man and his bicycle. I have not had ostrich meat in a while. I can only get it in Napa Valley, California.

Andre'

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  • coco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4188 W: 145 N: 4934] (23322)
  • [2006-07-16 16:37]

Hi Ryno.
Looks an amazing composition where the DOF has been well used. And also you captured, at the same time, a good portrait.

Regards.

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  • sined Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 21] (4288)
  • [2006-08-03 8:09]

thanks Ryno for this typical rural picture
love this old man smile to you !
Denis

Hi Ryno, Lekker man. Good colour, detail and exposure. This potrait captured all the elements of the man, his work and the landscape.

Minor critique, I would love to see more detail of his bicyclc in the photo and less sky

Bernard

Hi dear friend,
Excellent portrait with magnificent definition. Very good colours and focus. I like the man expression.
TFS and all the best

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  • aimee Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 249 W: 15 N: 182] (875)
  • [2006-09-10 8:03]

Hi Ryno,
I like your picture and especially the old man. He's got an interessant expression in the smile. An expressive and beautiful picture indeed.
Thanks for your visit.
Have a nice day

Aimée

I like this composition very much. And I can feel the atmosphere of this place...

beautiful shoot Ryno.

What a beautiful portrait , what a friendly smile!.... I like also to see the man in his environment!

Livia

Hi Ryno,
Beautiful portrait of this friendly old man standing in front of his (?) ostriches. I like your composition here and you managed the light on his face very well.
I drove through the Klein Karoo with a group and unfortunately we only saw a few ostriches. Would like to go there again and see a little more of it then the few days we had.
Well done and TFS,
Harko

Hi Ryno,
excellent portrait.
Old man sharpness is perfect.
Natural colours and without saturation.
Background with light blur.
Balanced exposition.
Compliments
Regards
Mario

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