Walking down the streets of Johannesburg
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InasiaJones (29337) 2012-01-18 14:43
I like the recuperation of this commercial icon and the graphic treatment that you've made of it. The M is on a line of third, which have some merit, but I think that your image would have been stronger if the subject would have been placed in the empty space on the left side.
Another comment that I think could improve this photo is that the passerby isn't blurred enough to evoke motion and to bring dynamism, or not static enough to be sharp.
In other words, she's standing between two possibilities, two photographic options that haven't been defined and your image illustrates this hesitation or random result.
Still, I can clearly see the potential, your intention and your inspiration, so for me, it is artistically interesting and creative, but falling short technically.
- Copyright: Luca Wolf (WOLF73) (221)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2010-07-30
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon 5D Mark II, Canon 24-70 2.8L USM, B+W 77mm 010 UV - Haze 1x
- Exposure: f/5.3, 1/125 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2012-01-18 12:09