Storm Cloud Over Pilanesburg Photo

Photographer’s Note

On a drive through South Africa's Pilanesburg game reserve. We had hoped for sunny weather but got gorgeous dramatic skies instead.

Nobody has marked this note useful

Critiques | Translate

lestans (15550) 2006-02-19 4:46

Shall I come back to South Africa to be able to meet such clouds?? I miss that great country!! Thank you for showind these clouds, I would prefer if you'd show also a bit of ground! It is too black. Livia

verde (957) 2006-02-19 14:13

Hi Sherry,
a nice study of clouds. They seemed we exposed and the sky is a crisp blue. The foreground is also very sharply focused. I looks great technically, but I think the overall composition is not capturing my attention.

Maybe if the bushes were a little closer so they would be bigger in the picture? RIght now they are so small and practically unnoticed except for their color.

b