Photographer’s Note
A few days ago, I was in Gorée, a place unique in the world ...
So emotional moments I spent there.
I am back to Paris, but still in Senegal :)
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david
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(3978) 2006-07-02 11:38
almost a silhouette, the figures are so dark in the shot.
more width would have been great ... either to show more of the beach, or perhaps give some indication of where the boy is pointing.
i think more needs to be done to make this shot dynamic.
Isabelle
(9022) 2006-07-02 16:25
que beleza, Sylvie, uma falsa silhueta com as linhas dos corpos sinuosas e tranquilas e do ponto de vista plástico muito bonito de olhar.
Acho que hiouve problemas de compressão aqui, porque o background está com artefatos.
um momento de poesia. espero que escreva um travelogue, porque, pelo jeito, tua viagem merece!
beijinho,
Isabel
Photo Information
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Copyright: Sylvie Fondacci Monteiro (SylFondacci)
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(4085) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-06-18
- Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment
- Camera: Canon Digital Ixus 500
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2006-07-02 11:32
Discussions
- To david: Answer (2)
by SylFondacci, last updated 2006-07-02 12:05 - To Isabelle: Obrigada ! (1)
by SylFondacci, last updated 2006-07-03 04:34
