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Dans ses pensees


Dans ses pensees
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Copyright: Francine Aubry (faubry) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3500 W: 352 N: 4198] (27165)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-05
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70
Exposure: f/2.8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-13 1:59
Viewed: 712
Points: 40
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Pres du puits, cette fillette etait dans ses pensees... elle est de l ethnie des bediks, dans le sud Senegal.

lens:70/200

Close to the well, this young girl was in her thought... it is from ethnos bediks group, in the south Senegal.

lens:70/200

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  • Ghub (77)
  • [2008-01-13 2:06]

Très belle photo, j'aime beaucoup le grain
Greg

Hi Francine,

I had to get used to the tight crop at the top of the composition. I don't think I would have cropped off the top of her head, but I do like the landscape layout in this portrait and the nice off-center placement of your subject. De whole compo has an almost B/W-film feel to it. And that is difficult to get! The over-exposed spot in the middle is a bit distracting, but that would have been difficult to adjust. Looks like a reflection on water. But overall a nice composition with a very nice B/W feel to it!!

Greetings, Dennis

Hi Francine,
Wonderful b&w portrait ... stunning! Well composed with very good tonal range, DOF, and contrast. Excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Joli portrait once again dear Francine, elle est mignonne cette fillette, le grain légèrement palpable de cette photo associé a ce magnifique bokeh conjugué au placement bien a droite de la compo de la fillette en font une photo bien racée, stylée et puissante, un brin sauvage.
J'adore

Bonjour Francine
magnifique portrait de cette petit fille. Le noir est blanc est très bien choisi. Félicitations et très bonne année.
Olivier

Hello dear Francine, my dear friend
Great portrait again. Perfect b&W job. Very good pov and compo "a la Francine" .What may this cute girl think, seemingly alone in her little world.
TFS and have a nice weekend
Best regards
MESUT ILGIM

Hi there,
Wonderful b&w portrait!!!!!
The energy.. the expression everything is just stunnig...
Congratulations for the composition!!!
TFS, have a great day...


Best regards from Brazil




Sue

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3869 W: 172 N: 4891] (22127)
  • [2008-01-13 7:21]

Hi Francine,
impressive portrait. good focusing and light control.
have a nice Sunday.
Burak Erek

Salut Francine,
Quelle magnifique portrait!
Son expression rêveuse est charmante.
Le cadrage est très bien vu et le n&b aussi.
Bonne soirée
Aline

Bonsoir Francine,
alors as tu passé un bon dimanche ? j'espère que oui - bien jolie frimousse que tu nous as mis ce jour - c'est je pense la petite fille de "Alone" n'est ce pas ? tu as le chic pour photographier les enfants "pensifs" ce qui leur donne toujours un air un peu triste, mais si attachant - gros bisous - à demain
daniel - K -

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  • japiey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1825 W: 334 N: 2568] (9295)
  • [2008-01-13 11:25]

Dear Francine,

Staring at the future...
DREAMS IN HER..

jean paul

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  • MarcT Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1540 W: 490 N: 2922] (11923)
  • [2008-01-13 11:38]

Salut Francine,
C'est un très beau portrait mais je crois reconnaître les stigmates du sharpening et noise reduction...
Le grain aurait peut-être été une alternative.
Amitiés
Marc

Hello Francine,
Beautiful portrait of this beautiful little girl.
I specially like the way she seems to be looking in the far distance, as if she was immerse on her thoughts.
The way she isolated from the background is great, as great is the backlight and the smooth grain of the photo.
Cheers.
Paulo

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  • delkoo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3681 W: 226 N: 4735] (23349)
  • [2008-01-14 0:50]

bonjour francine
superbe portrait au regard fascinant avec une utilisation juste de la PDC.

BONNE JOURN2E
didier

Salut Francine,

Je craque, elle est adorable !!!
Bises
Marie

her innocent gaze and the deep bokeh which leaves her totally alone in the environement make up this marvellous b&w portrait. a beautiful one again...

Bonjour, chère Francine,
Photo très bien composée, j'aime l'effet donné (grains). Cadrage fort bien pensé avec un très bon rendu.
Très bien fait.
Amitiés.
Philippe

Hi Francine.

What a face....impressive. And the B&W fits very well.

Rgs, Oscar

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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1766 W: 217 N: 1841] (15337)
  • [2008-01-16 1:24]

En effet, le regard de la petite et l'expression de son visage indiquent qu'elle doit être partie loin dans ses pensées. Une image sympathique.
Amitiés encore, Grazyna.

Francine,

What a lovely photo, first you are fabulous at Black and white conversion (I really struggle with this), secondly, I like the tight crop - very effective.

Regards,
Tracey

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