Right of Way

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Right of Way
Photo Information
Copyright: Hans Beilhartz (shepstone) (80)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-08
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-07-29 9:15
Viewed: 762
Points: 4
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Etosha Pan - crossing the road near Halali
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Great colours! Watching the giraffe cross the street, creates a bit of an illusion.

However, I would've chosen to show the entire shadow of the giraffe. This creates a playful scenery, and focus on the interaction of the shadows in the picture.

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  • jmcl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2487 W: 146 N: 3194] (11215)
  • [2007-07-29 10:35]

Hi Hans,

He certainly does have the right of way .. very nice .. realizing that wildlife like this is hard .. it happens so quick .. I love how he fits vertically in the frame .. horizontally I would like him to one side or the other .. I can't decide .. either to the left so I can see the whole shadow or to the right so he has "more of a place to go" through the frame. .. again very nice.

take care,

John

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