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Paradise
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Copyright: Jorge Macedo (JMacedo) (30)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-16
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/4, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-03-24 12:08
Viewed: 1249
Points: 14
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  • quillo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1144 W: 213 N: 990] (4948)
  • [2007-03-24 12:25]

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Bienvenido a TE.

Hola Jorge, te felicito por tu primera imagen en esta Web, es una foto en un formato pequeño pero con muy buenos detalles: encuadre, color, definición, luz... me gusta.

Buen trabajo.

Saludos.

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Jorge

Apanhas-te bem o sentido de paz que se deve sentir em bazaruto.
Os tons pasteis estão bons.
O horizonte parece-me ligeiramente inclinado (facilmente corrigivel)e acho que reduziste demasiado a fotografia.

Podias ter-nos dito alguma coisa nas notas

Bem vindo ao TE

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  • kiks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 585 W: 113 N: 456] (3435)
  • [2007-03-24 12:36]

Hi Jorge, welcome to Trekearth. What a beautiful first entry you post. I like the the emptines of the photo. Great composition.
TFS
Kiks

Hi Jorge, excellent first post. The boat is perfectly positioned. Good colours too. The sand bar just below the horizon is a real bonus. You could have posted a bigger file, you have 200kb at your disposal, your shot is only 12kb - this would have improved the sharpness considerably. You may think about reposting it again. Best regards & welcome to TE, Roberto

Lovely shot. great sense of tranquility. There is a bit of vignetting in the corners of the shot. Is the intentional?

I have done a workshop on the image to remove it - see what you think.

OLá Jorge
Vi esta paisagem milhares de vezes... e a beleza é a mesma.. a não ser o açoreamento que há data não havia... (nos anos 60 as dragas não paravam...)
Nos anos 40 havia a pesca à baleia...
As viagens ns botes à vela, soube, ainda incluem o transporte nas costas sem molhar os sapatos..
Cumprimentos
Rui

Hola Jorge,
Lograste una bonita composicion en esta foto. Los colores muy bien logrados y me gusta como dejaste el bote hacia el lado derecho de la imagen.

Saludes,
Iris

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