Ladies in red Photo

Photographer’s Note

The purpose of this photo is the color red, not the focus on the ladies. They are meant to just "be" there as part of the scenery. Hence also the empty space in front of them, so your eyes are slowly drawn to them

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scalerman (25787) 2007-02-23 5:11

Monique: SUPER composition - if only it were tack sharp? Next time - but your idea was spot on. regards, c

zips (1941) 2007-02-23 6:40

This looks like a good location and the colors are great.

I would like to see you move much closer as their is too much empty space in the bottom of the frame....especially in the right lower corner. Moving closer would have eliminated that.

Notes would be of use as well.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

mortijo (12406) 2007-02-24 10:04

I think you should have closed in on your main subject, the women. As it is there seems to be no subject at all. I also would have appreciated an accompanying note.

vagabondtravels (6115) 2007-02-25 6:24

Hi Monique

Nice comp and colors. The red is a great background. Good capture of human interaction. I like this docuentary style iamge. Well done.
Ben