Dromedaries

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• denizozharar93 (76)
• [2008-06-14 4:00]

I learn English gently. I am 15 yeas old. I receive education as english. I learn a word (chronogicaly) thanks to you. That's why I want to thank you.

This photo which is your first photo is very important for you. as for me you should keep until endless. dunes which are background and other dunes which are foreground are very adaptable. Camels seem completely black. You had to stand while sun was back.

I wonder Morocco so much. But I am frightened of standing alone in immense desert.

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• Jeppo (4912)
• [2008-06-14 4:09]

hallo jonas,

ich war ebenfalls in Merzouga. Ein ueberragender Platz fuers Photos...ein Ort voller Faszination und Farben.
ich mag dieses Bild sehr. Man sieht die Wuestengeometrie...und der Konstrast zwischen der Kleinlichkeit von Kamele und Menschen und der Unendlichkeit des Wuestens.

gute Arbeit
mfg
Silvio

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• Valerka (6976)
• [2008-06-14 4:49]

Hi,Jonas,
You must have had an exciting trip in the desert the colour of which is like that of gold-so beautiful.
And, certainly, you have changed your ideas after this desert trip.
TFS
Valerka:)

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• boa (221)
• [2008-06-14 4:58]

Hi Jonas,
your capture of the caravan looks great. I like the soft dunes and the POV. A faschination landscape.
Best regards
Boa

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• Dpbours (7412)
• [2008-06-14 8:00]

Hi Jonas,

Nice, that line of the 5 dromedaries.
Yep, that's a very nice composition. The sky is not very eventful, but the line of the dromedaries and the shades in the sand surely are!

Greetings and enjoy your weekend!
Dennis

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• oflaz (92)
• [2008-06-14 8:43]

Hi jonas
I like your photo.I had never seen before like your photo.
oflaz

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• leo61 (30911)
• [2008-06-14 8:46]

Hallo Jonas!
Der Wüstenklassiker schlechthin.
Tolle Kompo mit den Kurven und Schatten im Vordergrund.Auch schöner Kontrast der warmen Brauntöne mit dem sanften Blau.
Schönes WE,
Gruß,Leo

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• vincz (17514)
• [2008-06-14 9:21]

Great catch in the desert. Love the shadows, loves the tones. A very nice one.

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• gracious (11236)
• [2008-06-14 11:13]

Hello Jonas,
You had presented all your desert shots very well, my compliment!
this is another fine one with good depth, excellent colour and superb details!
the lighting is perfect in this shot
very well done
cheers
Tony

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• JCG (16188)
• [2008-06-14 11:46]

Hi Jonas,

Beautiful balance in this photograph, I like much this undulating foreground and these plays of lights giving an appreciable relief and interesting shades. I understand why it is called the sea of sand this desert… The caravan is well placed in your composition. Beautiful work Jonas.

With all my friendships and a very good WE,

Jean-Charles

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• quillo (4954)
• [2008-06-14 12:03]

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Hi Jonas, you are lucky in have lived through this beautiful experience in Morocco, and c have captured her in these interesting pictures, this one is very interesting with the line of dromedaries with the guide at the head of the caravan.

A good work of framing, congratulations.

Un saludo y hasta pronto.

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• jurek1951 (14503)
• [2008-06-14 14:20]

Hi Jonas,
Well seen, the view is beautiful, great colours and a good composition.Very interesting perspective and lovely lighting,
Georg

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• Bartleby (1234)
• [2008-06-14 14:26]

Hi Jonas,
I like this shot of yours. The waves of the sand and the line of camels, the tones on the sand and how you can spot the different colors of the men's clothes.
The sky is a little too white for my taste but lighting conditions do not always allow us to get what we want. Using a polarizing filter might have helpes but I'm not sure to be honest.
Well done anyway.

Yours,
philippe

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• Didi (28612)
• [2008-06-15 1:45]

Hello Jonas
Very nice frame of the caravan with interestings lights and shades on the sand; this is not a flat composition.
Well done.
Cheers.

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• orica77 (54)
• [2008-06-15 1:49]

Simply Great!

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• Floydian (24261)
• [2008-06-15 3:11]

Hi jonas,
Light is hard my friend, but that's no wonder in the desert. There are just a few hours during the day which are best for photography, the rest of the day we can sit in the shade or take a ride with a camel ;-)
Despite the light your composition is nice and although it's a scene we see a lot from there, always nice to look at it.
Take care, Henk

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• riclopes (26192)
• [2008-06-15 3:28]

Olá Jonas, another great shot from the desert. I like the way you cut off the sky and gave us a good portion of soft ondulating dunes in FG before we reach the chain of camels pulled out by the 'blue' (good color here) leader. They seem to be climbing to the reach the sky...
Have a nice Sunday,
ricardo

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• Waylim (2587)
• [2008-06-15 10:39]

Jonas,
Absolutely beautiful and a classic image of the Shahara Desert, what I like more about this image is that the sand is wet which add so much more color to the image and it's such a blessing to have rain in the desert and you're are there to photogrpahed it after it just rain. Composition is just perfect with the foreground showin the beautiful dune with various shades and tone. and finish up with the horizon of blue sky and the line of camels going through.
Way

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• Tobias__Ortmann (1721)
• [2008-06-16 8:39]

Hi Jonas,
schreib ich dir auchmal wieder eine Kritik
super Bild kenn ich schon vom dän die znea aber entzückt mich trozdem immer wieder
vorallem der blaue punkt machts in dem Bild
super schatten auch
lg Toba
Deutschland 4 öSTEREICH 0

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• Sistercosmo (261)
• [2008-06-16 14:56]

Hi Jonas,
wow! This is wonderful, a terrific composistion. I love the colors and the point of view. Perfect positioning of the sky and the sand, including the shadow in front. Well done!
Linda

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• John_F_Kennedy (20250)
• [2008-06-17 5:12]

Ich habe schon viel gesehen, aber irgendwie habe ich Karawanwn immer verpaßt. Wunderbar wie sie sich an den geschwungenen Dünen vorbeitbewegt.
Viele Grüße,
Achim

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• COSTANTINO (10265)
• [2008-06-17 6:01]

Hi JONAS,
splendid picture your first picture in the
Erg Chebbi near Merzouga..You have really
captured the feeling of this scene with the
dromedaries across the dunes,something I have
never seen...Natural colours..I like their
moving view which being action..
Thanks for sharing
Costantino

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• pablominto (28991)
• [2008-06-17 6:23]

Hello Jonas,

An interesting caravan and a wonderful composition!
As always the desert is a great subject when properly treated, with attractive colours, textures and lines...
Great work!

Greetings,
Pablo -

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• zeca (17312)
• [2008-06-19 20:40]

You did a nice work, Jonas. The light was not easy for you, but you did it very well. The framing to down is very nice, also capturing the beautiful dunes and well positioning the people and its camels with the rule of thirds.
Regards,
Zeca
Bback

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• Vanessa132 (897)
• [2008-06-22 0:46]

Hi Jonas,
beautiful desert shot! Well seen...good POV.
Nice colors
TFS Vanessa

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• anducina (7027)
• [2008-06-24 1:59]

Superb scene--the deset with its tones and tectures, the light-shadows play, the line of the colorful bedouins with their dromaders...

TFS,
Andreea

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• MarianneS (7044)
• [2008-06-28 8:45]

Hi Jonas,
So many nice images in your gallery :-0
I first comment on this one : impressive! Very nice composition! The crves of the deser are sweet and attractive. I like its colours with this nice light and the caravane, just passing by, is at the right place in your composition.
Well done!!
Regards,
Marianne

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• Angshu (24684)
• [2008-07-01 0:28]

Hello Jonas
The smooth texture & shapes of the dunes makes a nice FG, along with the caravan train. The crop is well done, showing not much of the sky. You took this shot when the sun appears to be overhead, but good exposure achieved. Good work Jonas!
Regards
Angshu

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• danyy (51209)
• [2008-07-07 10:20]

Bonjour JOnas,
un graphisme agréable et inattendu avec cette succession de courbes douces et ces jeux d'ombres et de lumières dans ces dunes.
Une mini caravane qui se place bien sur la composition.
Très bonne gestion des lumières et rendu des couleurs naturel.
Amicalement.
Daniel.

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• pticaruh (112)
• [2008-08-11 13:01]

The photo is excellent, but with a POV able to capture more distinctly the shadows of the camels, it will be maybe even better.

Regards,

Asparuh