On the Rythem of Sega-14

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• kevinos (5692)
• [2007-07-04 6:51]

Wonderful ding dong composition , Shailendra, from the close up heads, to the group in the middle distance to the sharply in focus, dazzling parachute in the sky. It has a great sense of excitement.regards kevin

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• Furachan (0)
• [2007-07-04 16:03]

I like Kein's word "Ding dong" - that's one way to express the complexity of this tunnel shot which works especially thanks to the distant parachute. Delightful! Once again and if Luko doesn't say it, I will: DESERVING OF MUCH MORE NOTICE.
Francis/

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• bhuniatrekearth (756)
• [2007-07-06 1:56]
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Dear Shailendra,
Well Nice photo, full with details. Usual tourist spot snap as expected from a tourist with a cam.
What is really interesting to watch is that all are not attentive to the object of interest that you wanted to highlight. Even those two goggles heads occupying the foreground and about 40% of the total area has turned out to be bothering a little.

But about Photo, as mood of mauritius this Photo will OK... but as photography Point of view .................

About framing ..It is individuals Choice. Selected white on this blue back-ground is a good complimentary colour of choice. Much appropriate I feel. But the width is something adding distraction for the viewer. Sometimes we are to widen frame to satisfy the 800 X 250 formula of Trekearth but your picture is not so small to avail that facility.

again taste is one of the subjective issue always there & it is endless debate.

After all a nice action in freeze with good colour.

Best wishes.
Dr. J.

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• sidstakes (738)
• [2007-07-14 12:44]

Nice frame you have here S. Like how you have managed to render all the different elements .. the colours of the blue sky and the yellow balloon, the orange turban, and the dark sunglasses into a very colourfully compact composition..it is very interestingly done...i like your bold claims to bhuniatrekearth of being a STREET PHOTOGRAPHER ...cool! ;)