On the Rythem of Sega-2

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• sayan (2603)
• [2007-05-28 3:52]

Hi Shailendra,

I like the overall mood in this composition. The foggy nature, the rains, the low light condition, everything giving me a pretty moody ambience. I like the way the lady in the front right corner has just entered the frame, though not quite sure to keep that bright umbrella in the middle.

regards

sayan

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• vagabondtravels (5888)
• [2007-05-28 7:45]

Hi Shailendra

I really like what you have done here. Great atmosphere you have set here. The saturated red really pops and the lady entering the frame makes the image. The umbrella doesnt bother me as much as the tourist pointing. Anyhow good work.
Ben

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• Furachan (0)
• [2007-06-01 21:20]

Another strong compo, Shail, this one, in spite of the rain has a truly festive and slightly "mad" feel like you might se at a carnical. Colors pop and I really like the position of the poeple in the frame.
Cheers,
-F

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• Luko (13479)
• [2007-06-06 5:53]

Another middle-of-the-road shot I reckon. It could have worked, with the girl's profile on the right, but the gringo definitely screws up the scene.
You could put anyone else instead of the gringo I think that would have worked. A green gringo is a big photo no-no. (remember that sentence and try to say it very quickly 25 times in a row, before every shooting session)

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• kajspice (4495)
• [2007-06-07 18:00]
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• AnimeshRay (8655)
• [2007-06-12 10:00]

Another expertly composed moment with many layers and many activities (and stories) in each layer. Very nice indeed!