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Paridise with boat :D


Paridise with boat :D
Photo Information
Copyright: Pedro Vinagre (pvinagre) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 61 W: 24 N: 57] (198)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-02-22
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon A70
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-02-05 8:05
Viewed: 1397
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mauritius - Beach of the Pirogue Hotel - Sunset behind a rainy cloud.

The only "retouche" made was to the White part of the sky. With GIMP and the Selection Editor - and the the balance/Contrast
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Pedro,
You don't need a lot of critiques to improve your skills. The horizon is straight, the photo is sharp, the colours are good and the sky makes the photo interesting. Maybe adding a frame and telling us a little bit more how this photo ended up on TE and/or what the conditions were when you took the photo.
regards,
David

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  • alive Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 0 N: 102] (507)
  • [2007-02-05 8:51]

olá!!
Gosto aqui muito das cores. Nitidez também a condizer.
parabéns.
luis.

A composição está boa. Talvez tivesse dado um pouquinho mais de espaço ali à direita para separar a escada do fim da moldura ao mesmo tempo que desaparecias com aquele barco meio cortado ali na esquerda... No pp (pós-processamento) teria saturado um pouco as cores selectivamente, principalmente os vermelhos e os amarelos para puxar pelas cores do por do sol. De resto está muito boa. Nota-se um pouco de ruido da A70, mas nada de especial. Muito bem.
PS. Vi nos forums que queres comprar a 10-20 da Sigma. Tenho uma. Muito boa...

Olá Pedro,
una composición bien estructurada, y con todos los elementos jugando su papel en la imagen.
El encuadre asimétrico es muy bueno, respeta los tercios y aumenta la belleza de esta vista, el cielo está espectacular (buen PP), y las barcas añaden un toque de color blanco al mar, que tiene unos tonos muy elegantes.
Un buen trabajo,
Saludos,
Josep

Hello, Pedro.
What a great shot this is. I love the soft, subdued colors and the way the pier contrasts so sharply. Excellent composition with the pier coming from the corner and right into a perfect spot. Very soft, easy mood about it. VERY nicely done...
Best wishes, Shelly

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