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Smile of Poverty


Smile of Poverty
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Copyright: John Paskey (happypoppeye) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 615 W: 58 N: 826] (3600)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-08
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D40X, Nikkor 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 G ED AF-S VR
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-03 8:32
Viewed: 622
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
...yes, here it is, the face of a woman so poor she barely has enough to eat everyday...sad, bitter, begging, miserable and just wiating to die...or so some would want you to believe.

This photo was taken in a village a day's drive out of Timbuktu towards Sevare. One of the poorer villages I have seen yet happy. Yes, the people are poor, extremely poor compared to western standards, actually unbelievably poor compared to western standards. There are even a few photos here on TE of the place, yet the village is hidden above and beneath a beautiful landscape and honestly, I don't think the people who took the landscape shots even knew the village was there, so I'll keep it's location to myself and maybe make it back there one day and find the people just as happy and hidden as my first visit.

Yet, unless you see this for yourself, I think it is hard for many to understand. The western interpretation of the word "poor" does not exist in places like this. Everyone is poor, always have been, never thinking what may happen in the future because they need to survive today. What I also found was that the amount of money or possessions one owned had nothing to do with happiness, kindness or the persons quality of life. It really does need to be seen to be believed.

This woman is Fula, never saw television before, and was simply amazed at the photo of herself I showed her. She (and a few other women) cooked me some dinner and really wanted nothing for it. Just showing hospitality to a stranger...a great experience, person and place I will never forget.

Let me know what you think
John

PS - trying to get back into the post processing mode - how is the sharpness on this?, a little oversharpened? - printed out this photo is razor sharp but really looks a bit soft here, yet I want to say portions of it look oversharpened... Thanks, John

...which leads me to a little rant after spending six months in the middle east and africa. I saw a shoe commercial on TV last night that ended in "renew your passion for shoes"...are you kidding me, renew your passion for shoes...???...I must have seen at least ten thousand people walking in trash, rocks, fields, freezing cold and the like without shoes...the money spent on one pair to renew your passion could easily make fifty peoples lives so much easier and better!!! It really is insane.

...OK, sorry, done now.

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i think you may be right that parts are oversharpened-- to me it appears in places in her skin. beautiful foto though.

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  • avene Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1051 W: 68 N: 1316] (4940)
  • [2008-04-03 10:06]
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hello John,
first, about the photo - excellent work! I don't see any oversharpening, everything is exactly as it should be. I particularly like how you composed the shot with the off the shoulder dress framing her face beautifully.

second, about the poverty - I think the people's attitute towards their posessions (or the lack of it) to large extend (but not entirely, of course) depends on their exposure to the information about how wealthy others are and how easily it is compare with these "others". I've just read the article about DPRK, where the real fear is that the ruling party would never ease the flow of information, because there's the wealthy South Kore the people in DPRK can identify with. but you're right, in many places what I'd call a poor person is much happier that I am.

with kind regards,
Kristine

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  • limule Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 16 N: 265] (2105)
  • [2008-04-03 11:52]
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Hello, beautiful work. I agree with you and with your feeling.

However, I am not sure the title right. Africans are smiling. Whoever they are, wherever they live and whatever they have, they are always very sensitive to beauty and happiness, they are some very good philosphs... I know some "rich " africans comapred to african standards. They are the same. I think this is just a continent where people celebrate happiness and good relationships. I am not sure it is related to any definition of poverty. And this is were they have a part of the trurth, that we have lost in Europe. Geraldine

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  • toto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2339 W: 107 N: 2450] (13188)
  • [2008-04-04 1:24]

Bonsoir,
belle photo de cette femme et de son sourrire qui est bien fixé, beau portrait, bonne netteté,jolies couleurs.
Bien vu, bien pris.

Amitiés Thomas
Je reviens

Hey John - Nice portrait - not over sharpened, and very nice colors. Thanks for your indepth note about wealth - I agree - when I was travelling in Africa I didnt see anyone as being poor in the end. Everyone was just who they were and living their lives the ony way they've ever known - they're happy and it works, so I dont think of them as poor or deprived or anything. I think your message is along these lines too.
To me her teeth and gums seem very pale - the redness of the gums seems to have vanished! That was the only thing that stood out to me in terms of PP.
Later!
Dave.

Hi John,

That's a good portrait, compelling and very human.

Your note testify of some shocking truth when travelling in poor countries. The difference is so irreconcilable... Therefore, such a great smile is very touching and even more meaningful. Colour wise, this is a great photo for ethnic motifs and patterns. Background bokeh looks very good.

Cheers!

André

Hey John,

Your recent portrait images are stunning. National Geographic looking in presentation, the notes are very interesting, personal and brings us to where you are!

Best Regards ;)

Jom

Yes i think this is a well done portrait when you captured her beautiful smile and it combined perfect with her colourful cloths. i'm agree with your note but i see the title a bit too much...
Thanks for share it, John...

daniel

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