Photographer’s Note
I took this whilst working to help refurbish the village school house and he was just so cheeky.
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(1066) 2007-10-06 13:05
Hi Graeme
I love this shot for it's so naural and joyful.
I suggest other framing. Concentrate on his expression. If you can't have the whole legs, cut them off completely, just under his elbows (sounds awful, I know, this cutting ;-)I also think you should cut off the space on the right. I believe it'll improve the composition and will help to enjoy his face and gesture.
Regards
Joanna
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Photo Information
- Copyright: Graeme Cunningham (mx_ritchie13) (107)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-05-11
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/4, 1/50 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Kids from the World Part IV [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2007-10-06 11:38
Viewed: 3804
Points: 1
