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Copyright: inn michiels (michiels) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 841 W: 7 N: 245] (3874)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1997
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon 501
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-13 5:47
Viewed: 589
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken at the beach of Serrekunda.
scan from slide, qualityloss.
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  • fdo57 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 35 W: 1 N: 18] (127)
  • [2008-01-13 5:57]

Hello,
Even with the qualityloss it's a remarkable picture. The texture of the sand, the contrast and the colors make this a very good work. Maybe some noice-reduction work could enhance the sky a little bit. Regards,

Fernando.

Hi Inn,

Nice catch! Excellent deph and great composition. The guy red t-shirt add a nice color contrast to the sand color. The sand paters add to guide the eys. Really good.

Cheers,

Flavia

Great pov to capture this composition along the wavy lines on the sand and having a red shirt for color contrast. Nice view of the man walking into the frame.

Nice perspective view. Well done. TFS

bill

Hello Inn,
A very strong composition with the lines of the rippled sand producing a strong movement into the picture. The guy in the red shirt makes a very strong focus in the foreground. I've been doing some scanning of old slides lately and I wouldn't complain about any major loss of quality of this one. I find it very well done.
Regards,
Gert

It's a good scan, Inn. The colors are very natural and true. You've been to some great places. Here the beach looks as though it must stretch all the way to Cape Town. If you're just willing to follow the lines. Best, -Hugh

Salut Inn,
Très bonne photo. J'aime bien la bonne position de la personne. Bien composé avec les lignes.
Amicalement,
Fabrice

Hello Inn,
The red shirt of the man is an eye catcher and point you choose for the shot the most fitting to enjoy the perspective and his way!

Many wishes,
Thomas

Hi Inn,
first of all this is good scan. And second: I like this shot for its great perspective and depth. The man in red is exactly what the shot needs to break calm and "clear" composition. Nice light too.
Regards
Stanislav

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  • Griet Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 0 N: 30] (442)
  • [2008-01-16 7:43]
  • [+]

Hey Inn,

Long time no here! Sorry maar een zware griep en bronchitis heeft me tijdens de feestdagen thuis gehouden en dan heb je niet veel zin om met foto's bezig te zijn. Buiten wat op Flickr zetten heb ik niet veel met fotografie bezig geweest.

Enfin, we zijn er terug maar de tijd blijft nog steeds een probleem :(
Ik vind je beeld hier mooi van opbouw met een mooi contrasterende kleur met het rode T-shirt
Goede kwaliteit van scan!
Groetjes
Griet

Hi Inn,
I agree it has lost in quality with the scan, especially in the rendering of the blue tones as it seems, but the composition idea is good, placing the viewer as the immediate follower of this guy in red works well in taking him into the action.
Have a nice day JY

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