walking out of a shop Photo

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Man walking out of a shop in Bahar Dar, Ethiopia.

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stevep (556) 2006-11-15 21:55

Hi Swiatek,

It's an interesting idea but for me it fails because it conveys no real emotion -- to me the title is apt; its simply a photo of a man walking out of a shop.....

I think it would have been better if we could see the mans face rather than having it obscured by the shadows. And ultimately, if on his face we were to read some kind of fairly intense emotion, that might make the photo I think.

It was a good attempt and thanks for posting,
steve

s10001in (1485) 2006-11-19 1:47

Swiatek this is real beauty.
Very well satureated colors & dryness every where. I can feel Ethiopia.
Some wonderful colors & dark tones with saturated shadows too.
Beautiful photo.
Man just way out of the shop..real motion here.
Amazing work.
-Regards,