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Photographer’s Note

Couldn't resist posting this photo... I think the girls look so natural...

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ninaL (19300) 2007-05-19 11:51

Witaj...
Trudno mi oceniac to zdjecie...fajne, spontaniczne wyrazy twarzy, ale ale...po pierwsze, troche takie jakby rodzinno-albumowe (choc wiem, ze to nie Twoje corki ;)) z wakacji...po drugie, te cienie troche przeszkadzaja, zwlaszcza u tej gracji po lewej...troche jej psuja jedno oko. Nie wiem, jak sie te sprawe zalatwia w PS...sama mam problem z portretem faceta, ktoremu nie potrafie usunac cienia...ale wiem, ze niektorzy potrafia to zrobic...
No ale coz, za urok spontanicznosc, masz duza zielona.
Pozdrawiam. Grazyna.

sengir (4946) 2007-05-19 12:14

zgadzam sie z Nina, nie Twoj poziom, nie Twoja bajka..

syd1946 (17825) 2007-05-19 13:14

Hi Jerzy,
I agree with you,the girls looks looks so natural.I like very much the way that they didn't looks at your camera.Fresh photo with almost a summer feeling!
Wishes,
Thomas

ben4321 (9781) 2007-05-19 14:26

Yeah, you captured some great natural and relaxed expressions here Jerzy, and I like the fact that there is something clearly more interesting than your antics that has grabbed their attention. Good light too.
I'm not sure about the framing though. I think shifting the framing over to the left would have worked better, excluding that chair in the background. At the very least, we needed a bit of a gap between the head of the girl on the left and the edge of the frame, I think.

Cheers,
Ben

faubry (32197) 2007-05-19 17:54

very cute and natural expression from these girls, beautiful colors, i like because they dont no to you
take care
francine

jinju (14265) 2007-05-20 7:41

Hej Jurku,

byles tez w Egipcie? Ale wycieczka, no no...ladne foto. Spontaniczne, naturalne, slodkie:) Widze dlaczego chciales je nam pokazac

luisafonso (858) 2007-05-21 5:29

A real Kodak moment. :) Good light, great recorded expression, not much more to say. I agree with Ben about the compo. A little shift to the left wouldn't hurt.

Vato_Law (11642) 2007-05-21 16:34

Hello Jerzy,
no special good looking background just the sea as simple as that, no story about the girls but this beautiful and innocent look so charming and so attached to the kids. It's amazing as while the years pass we loose this kind of natural smile while when we were kids this was the most natural thing.
A nice snap on these two girls.
Cheers.
Paulo

jlynx (11380) 2007-05-23 7:38

Powiem tak,
Plener to nie fotograficzne atelier - tutaj wszystko mo¿e siê zdarzyæ, rzeczy dziej± siê szybko i nieoczekiwanie. Nie ma czasu na ustawianie kamery, nie ma najczê¶ciej mo¿liwo¶ci ustawienia modela, aranzacji sytuacji nie mówi±c ju¿ o wyrazie twarzy, oczu. £apiemy ¿ycie na goraco taj jak tutaj w nadziei, ¿e uwiecznili¶my ten jedyny u³amek sekundy, który zarejestrowa³ nasz mózg.
Pozdrowienia,
Jurek