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The breakfast
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Copyright: Gaby Gobou (gaby) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1420 W: 45 N: 1555] (19750)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-16
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: SONY Cybershot DSC-T9
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-18 3:42
Viewed: 1995
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Petite Rose - Roselogo - enfant Gbressay - elle est en train de manger du riz, son petit déjeune (le riz, c'est la vie comme dit notre ami Luan)

Small Rose - Rose logo - Gbressay chikd - she is eating rice, her breakfast ("Rice is life" as says our friend Luan)

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rice is life, and the kid seemingly had a lot of "life" in his life already :-))
cute, but i like it for the simplicity and that decaying wall behind as a background,
good work,
best wishes, j.

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4305 W: 88 N: 5304] (25642)
  • [2006-07-18 4:37]

Hi Gaby,
very well positioned and a great catch of her serious look,
regards, Gerrit

Salut Gaby,
Encore une belle scène de vie..
Simple et efficace... Ta composition est très bien réalisé..
Bravo
Vince

Nice portrait, sweet girl!
Raluca

salut gaby
le don de fait de beau portrait comme celui la il n'y en a qu'un......
bravo belle netteté couleur et expression du visage trés sérieux de la gamine qui semble être inquiete que tu va lui prendre son déjeuner, magnifique
amitiés
gilbert

Bonjour Gaby
L'enfant est tres bien positione dans le cadrage.
Un portrait tres reusite.
A+
Daniel
PS cest en Ethiopie que je pars dans deux semaines.

A beautiful child with a serious face. Great composition...simple and direct.
well done
bev

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  • faubry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3595 W: 355 N: 4323] (28140)
  • [2006-07-18 6:48]

belle petite fille toute intimidée il me semble, j'aime beaucoup comment elle met ses jambes, par contre tjs les mêmes problèmes avec le nombril..
bonne journée
amicalement
francine

Bonjour Gaby, un peu triste la petite rose aujourdhui, pensive peut-etre. Aimerait-elle partager son assiette avec Luan?
Merci pour ta note, cher ami. Ce nest pas tellement que je me suis devenu un peu rare sur TE, c'est ue j'ai un peu detruit quelques cliches, alors ca donne l'impression que je ne monte plus rien...;o)
J'espere que tu ne travaille pas trop.
Bonne journee,
Francis

A very well-composed shot, Gaby--she's perfectly placed in the frame. The background wall has nice texture but nothing to distract from the girl and her penetrating eyes. One minor detail--the area around her hair has a slightly odd look, maybe due to PP. But the overall effect is excellent. Regards, Ken.

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3167 W: 96 N: 1601] (14241)
  • [2006-07-19 3:30]

Hey gaby,

thanks for driopping by my flickr gallery.

I like this shot first for the nice moment of life. Your photography is very honet and to the point and you dont dress it up in sup[erfluous tricks. Life is as you show it, which I really like. Old wall, new life as Jerzy noticed, I think this is the essence of this photo.

hello Gaby my friend:)
I like this cropping
great BG and this little child makes that I feel so good when I am watching this photo
another exellent photo

pls be careful in these hard days
best wishes my friend
take care and greetings for you family
rgs

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  • amazon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 0 N: 838] (5444)
  • [2006-09-26 10:46]

Bonjour Gaby,
I love your all black women and children,
Very nice POV and DOF,
Regards,
Iffet

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