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A double smile


A double smile
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Copyright: Gaby Gobou (gaby) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1418 W: 45 N: 1547] (19652)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-07
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: SONY Cybershot DSC-T9
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-25 3:34
Viewed: 1283
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 42
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Warriess et Mayago durant une séance de maquillage

Warriess and Mayago during a make up seance
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C'est l'effet studio ici, Gaby avec le fond entierement blac comme ca. Cela fait tres "pro". Charmante scene avec d'excellentes couleurs.
Amicalement,
Francis

Salut Gaby,
tu es collectioneur de sourires, alors merci de nous en faire profiter un petit peu ;)
Encore un très joli portrait (double cette fois) avec ce fond très blanc qui rend les visages encore plus éclatants.
Bravo
Philippe

Hi Gaby
A lovely smile of the kid and great compo and POV.
& greetings Albrecht &

Beautifully captured the essence of motherly love .. beautiful subjects .. well composed duel potrait

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  • Paolo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4708 W: 146 N: 9045] (39813)
  • [2006-04-25 5:10]

Hi Gaby wonderful portraits!
excellent focus and light and a fantastic contrast whit the white background.
great shot.
thanks, ciao

Hi Gaby.
Today we have a small ladys.
Good double portrait and great smile.
Regards.
adam

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4172 W: 86 N: 5092] (24739)
  • [2006-04-25 6:14]

Hi Gaby, fine family-scene.
It looks great,
thanks and regards, gerrit

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2903 W: 618 N: 3152] (38067)
  • [2006-04-25 6:30]

This is your fingerprint. Excellent double portrait. Superb, as usual.

Bonjour Gaby,
J'admire la complicité que tu arrives à crées avec tes modèles. Très beau choix de cadrage qui donne la même importance à l'adulte et à l'enfant.
Amicalement,
Emma

Je suis trés content de voir que tu as retourné a le fond blanc pour donner plus d´importance a cette femme et cette fille. On a l´air d´une photo publicitaire dans cette photo mais plus réel. Merci Gaby, toujour un plaisir.
Miguel

Salut Gaby,
je trouve les angles des visages de cetes filles tres interesante, ils forment une sorte de V virtuele,
j'aime bien l'apaprence "studio" de la photo.
A+
Daniel

Hi Gaby,
Excellent shot, lovely smiling. Point of view, sharpness, nice colors and framing are wonderful. TFS. Congratulations...
Ali Rıza

Very sweet shot, Gaby, again, I always imagine you live in Paradise, just looking at your subjects warms my heart and makes me dream...
Very well caught work, beuatiful moment!
sasa

You are great there is no doubt. Another splendid shot.
Now I know her also.
Thanks

Hi Gaby, beautiful faces, beautiful expressions, cute unusual scene. Superb focus! In particular - the skin is amazing, the lips are perfect. The blank background and white frame well chosen, the shot is very strong and we concentrate on the subjects. Splendid, thanks for sharing! Regards, Daniel

Salut Gaby,
De beaux sourires effectivement, j'aime bien ton cadrage avec ces deux visages qui équilibrent la composition, la coiffe donne de la couleur et la façon dont tu l'as coupé est parfaite dans l'angle de la photo.

salut Gaby, alors la voilà cette photo sans flash? je la trouve tres réussie, malgré un petit manque de piqué mais qui n'a rien à voir avec le flash;-) beau cadrage serré et jolis sourires

BEAUTY...
Love the smile on the young lady. Nice POV
Sathiyan S

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  • imrek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1359 W: 65 N: 1289] (6813)
  • [2006-04-26 10:56]

Hi Gaby,
excellent point of view and very well burn't of background!!! The eyes is really good exposed, I like it!!!
regards,
imre

2 beaux sourires pour le prix d'un, la petite fille a l'air tres coopérante pour se maquiller comme maman ! c'était pour quelle occasion ?
Vanessa

Hi Gaby
Interessant cette séance de maquillage. C'est étrange se fond blanc alors que l'on est en vue plongeante. Du coup, on perd ses repères.
AMicalement
BErtrand

Hello friend,

I guess we both like to shoot beauty makeup sessions. ;-D

Once again you have a great portrait and photo. The smiles are warm and sincere.

I especially like three things about your shots, including this one:

1. The thought and attention given to positive/negative shapes, this includes cropping decisions.

2. The use of more intense contrast and color (generally). I think that it adds dimension, the "missing" factor in many photos.

3. The natural non-posed situations and subjects chosen.

I agree with you, it's so hard to get a good photo of people. One that is not posed and really shows something special about the person, a spiritual dimension, while creating a well designed and executed photo as well.

I appreciate your comments, I feel like I am just starting to get better. People like you have helped me so much. I really want to be a great photographer, and not just OK or even good. My intention is to work hard to get there. It's difficult because so much of learning and growing is stumbling and failing, then having that pointed out, then listening and correcting and improving so you can get better. rather ego-bruising.

(You also seem to be very prudent but skilled in your PP.)

Well, have a wonderful day,
Your Amigo, Herb

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