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mother and son


mother and son
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Copyright: Eric LE PARC (eleparc) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2494 W: 86 N: 2107] (24014)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1986-01
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-03-18 4:56
Viewed: 2187
Points: 4
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years ago in a happy quiet and peaceful Ivory coast, on the way to the beaches from abidjan, I shot this photo of a young mother and her child.. I loved the interaction between these two and the childish look in the mothers expression.
Original photo , no adjustments

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To touristdidi: re. your commenteleparc 1 03-26 12:48
To manny: re. the vertical compo or more of the childeleparc 1 03-18 08:01
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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2980 W: 89 N: 4012] (21348)
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This one Eric is a bit soft. I like the expression of the mother (she's quite young) but I am quite curious about the child. Maybe more of him/her.

Anyway, the soft colors are good too. Try composing it vertically.

Pure joy!!!!! More child would be nice, but the feeling is sufficent as it is!!!

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