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• syair (240)
• [2005-03-29 18:20]

we see too many faces and u didn't focus on the main subjects, I would crop and leave only the 2 girls on the right and maybe leave the small boy on the right in the frame.

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• kclai (2259)
• [2005-03-29 20:43]
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I disagree with Syair about the cropping work leaving only 2 girls in your photo.
I would say it's quite a balance angle. A person in the foreground, a couple in action in the middle and the rest at the background.
The impression of the girl whose hair is been fixed improved the quality of this photo. But the lady with the cap which look at the camera spoilt the "neutral" of it.

Continue with good photo, Olivier. And hope to see more of your portrait photo in future.
Eric

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• momshu (501)
• [2005-03-31 13:24]

I'm impressed that each person is engaged with the moment. Exposure is well done with dappled lighting. I like the exposed backgrounds as it lets us see the day by day life.

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• entrelec (8336)
• [2005-05-02 13:50]
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Merci pour le commentaire.Je vais directement à cette photo , intéressanrte et qui aurait pu être très bonne. J'ai pour ma part l'impression qu'elle contient trop d'informations.As-tu essayé de resserrer le cadrage sur l'action principale? Il s'agit bien sûr d'un avis tout personnel.
Joel

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• fritzi007 (508)
• [2008-08-22 0:32]

Hallo Olivier!
Nice shot,nice motiv!
MFG Wolfgang