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Pleased
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Copyright: Jerzy Bucki (bantonbuju) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3757 W: 136 N: 7058] (42574)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-03
Categories: Daily Life, Event
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Cape Verde people [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-06 3:33
Viewed: 585
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
His best years are long gone... but he is young in heart... and seeing young people exercising capoeira is certainly a pleasing view...
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You have coped with black and white composition successfully. Excellent shot, highly professional.

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Hello Jerzy, an image in B/W with great visual impact, the first plane contrasts perfectly with the zone desenfocada of the young people doing capoeira,

I like very much this framing, congratulations.

That happens on a happy Sunday. Best Regards.

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Very interesting photo with this high exposure and this focus,
I think that the scene is concentrating on his left eye,nice glance and pleasant level of detail,I think that somehow it's in
Grazyna's style,with the high exposed background and also the general look of the photo.Splendid work indeed.Have a great sunday.
Horatiu

Mnie cala Twoja seria kojarzy sie z klimatami kubanskimi, czuje w niej ta sama sile muzyki, pogode ducha, niespiesznosc i potrzebe bycia w ruchu, z innymi.. Wspanialy portret, 100% ciala i krwi.. drugi plan wprowadza pulsowanie. Z takich portretow sie jest dumnym :)
z pozdrowieniami, Agnieszka

Strong portrait Jerzy - I like the way he's looking away from the goings-on in the background, and the way the door divides the two halves of the frame. Great expression too.
The OE in the top right corner is a shame, but only to be expected when shooting such a high contrast scene digitally. Black and white film would have handled this a lot better.
Maybe you could have framed tighter around the man's face - just above the peak of his cap, say - to cut down on the amount of brightness there.
Other than that, an excellent shot.

Cheers,
Ben

Love it !!

A whole' lotta a good photography in therre...
And the story is good...
And the action is there...

What a pleasent way of starting the Sunday on TE...
From this photo...

Thanks, buddy

jurcio

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2841 W: 609 N: 3010] (36419)
  • [2008-04-06 12:08]

Główny atut to model. Złapałeś go (ustawiłeś... nie ważne...) w doskonałym momencie w świetnym grymasie. Drugi plan też gra koncertowo.
Pozdrawiam.

Hello Jerzy,
His best years might be gone, but surely he keeps this warm and welcoming smile, and the tenderness well present as we can see by his look.
The contrast presented here between this old face and the kids practising 'capoeira' is very nice as nice is the way his face is dettached from the background.
You seem to be handling your new toy quite well judging by the photos you've been presenting us.
Cheers.
Paulo

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  • xuaxo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2495 W: 163 N: 2296] (3961)
  • [2008-04-08 10:57]

Hello Jerzy
No so nice as previous shot (I don't like so much light on top right), but it's also a good portrait.
Mantenha,
F

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  • coco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4095 W: 140 N: 4809] (22831)
  • [2008-04-11 7:33]

Witaj Jerzy.

Excellent composition and also nice see how you used the light and the black and white.

WEll done.

you are right ..with such smile he can stay forever young :D
great PP ,strong portrait
thanks sharing
regards,anes

Your gallery is full of strong characters and I wonder why do you find them...:)This portrait is also strong,great and perfectly composed
Superb
A nice weekend

Ciao Jerzy,
very good message in it and excellent portrait of this man with a very happy expression. Great choice of focus and scene.
Anna

Jeszcze mnie tu nie było ? - no to już jestem :))
Fajne, dwudzielne - sympatyczna twarz pełna z pełnym wyrazu uśmiechem i znakomita druga połowa - cala bokehowa i pełna ruchu. Znakomicie uchwycone. Jak rozumiem on na zewnątrz a ludzie ćwiczący capoeirę w środku - tym większa chwała za utrzymanie balansu światła.
Pozdrawiam ciepło T.

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  • Ber Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 17 N: 278] (6034)
  • [2008-04-12 14:18]

Ciekawe spojrzenie na dwa swiaty, dwie akcje, a przejscie jest tak bardzo plynne ze mamy spojna calosc
dzieki za poranne odwiedziny ;)

Hi Jerzy,
I was attracted by the thumb of this photo, I like your excentered framing too, and what a lovely smile and a happy expression !
Cape Verde certainly inspired you !
Compliments,
Cath.

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