Hangin' Out

Critiques [Translate]

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• Philippe (8217)
• [2008-04-02 8:12]

Hi, John. A nice portrait of this young lady who already has a terrifying glance. The pot she's holding against her mouth gives her an air of innocence which suits the picture well but is not really her nature, I think. A good off-centerd composition with a wall that brings out the main subject well. I think the pink sandals are a very interesting feature in the image. Maybe some sharpening would have made the photo better on the screen.

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• taypejka (1004)
• [2008-04-02 8:12]

Hello John,

Beautiful colour composition of a Cameroonian girl with pink sandals and the orange (of different tones) wall backgroung.
compliments and greets
emilia

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• holmertz (2418)
• [2008-04-02 8:13]

Hello John,
I love this photo, a touching and amusing portrait. The background is perfect for this girl, but the sandals are just so wrong! Couldn't you ask her to take them off? ;-)
(On the other hand, they really make you look).
Best wishes,
Gert

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• crhieatt (3555)
• [2008-04-02 10:23]

John,
Sharp enough for my liking and, I guess, this is a photo of reality, of what was in front of you, so there's no need to ask the little girl to conform to remove her sandals - if that's what she wears.
Good colours and compisition - good shot.
Regards
Colin

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• limule (1992)
• [2008-04-02 12:04]

I like this portrait , especially how it is composed and I also like your note about africa.. Beautiful shot. She is carefully watching the camera like if it was normal to be pictured, very relaxed. Geraldine

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• brandstaetter (5952)
• [2008-04-02 12:17]

Hi John,
excellent, simply excellent. From the colours to the perfect background to the encouraging note. Of course the best is the natural looking portrait, making feel the personality of the girl.
Compliments, Chris
PS I read the other notes about the pink sandals..the colours remind me of a sofa series of B&B Italia, they payed the best designers of the world to create pink-red and pink-orange combinations.

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• dareco (6060)
• [2008-04-02 13:28]

I am really enjoying this series, another to add to my 'adorable kids' theme :) I was wondering where you had disappeared to, nice to see what you've been upto. A great portrait of this beautiful child. TFS

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• wolf38 (5829)
• [2008-04-04 1:37]

Hallo John. Das Photo ist schön und sehenswert. Es wirkt bestens. Wundervolle Farben. Die Komposition ist hervorragend. Alles hat seinen idealen Platz. Meine Anerkennung. Viele Grüße, Wolfgang.

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• markstaples (15280)
• [2008-04-04 2:40]

Hi John
Congratulations on such a strong gallery of pictures. Here the subject is perfectly placed in the frame and the wall is the perfect backdrop. Very good work.
Best wishes
Mark

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• pboehringer (16475)
• [2008-04-04 7:38]

John,
are you truing to compensate your 6 months abscence from TE by posting now almsot daily a gem? Go slow! Let us get the real feeling for each post. Don't post more than 1-3 shots per week. Let each of your new art work sink in slooooowly. This shots are to good to be lost in the huge daily quantity of mediocre shots here at TE.
Take for example this present post. This is friggin good. A real piece of art with so much meaning and expression! I'm sure that you could fill pages of text around this single shot.
Two things on this shot: First, the little green leave at the right lower corner is magnificent. Second, the sharpness could be better.
Peter

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• Dpbours (5864)
• [2008-04-05 10:25]

Hi John,

I'm not sure it will be boredom. Boredom arises not for a lack of things to do but the inability to latch onto any specific activity.
This girl perheps looks a bit reserved towards a stranger with a big camera. Dare to go through your knees!! You're already scary enough to the little girl without being 1m80 ;-). I'm joking John. But a nice, intimate shot - though the PoV could have been slightly lower. And no, to me it's not boredom. Maybe a reserved curiosity.

Greetings and have a good weekend!!
Dennis