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...e o sol penetrou no meu coração...


...e o sol penetrou no meu coração...
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Copyright: Alberto Piubello (albertopiubello) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 360 W: 46 N: 847] (2491)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-14
Exposure: f/3.5
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Reflets, Reflections on the water [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-01-17 11:30
Viewed: 3106
Favorites: 8 [view]
Points: 92
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
"De manhã temendo que me achasses feia
acordei tremendo deitada na areia
mas logo os teus olhos disseram que não
e o sol penetrou no meu coração
vi depois uma rocha na cruz
e o teu barco negro dançava na luz
vi teu braço acenando entre as velas já soltas
dizem as velhas da praia, que não voltas
são loucas... são loucas
Eu sei meu amor
que não chegaste a partir
pois tudo em meu redor
me diz que estás sempre
comigo...
No vento que lança a areia nos vidros
na água que canta no fundo mortiço
no calor do leito no barco vazio
dentro do meu peito estás sempre comigo"
(Barco Negro, Amalia Rodrigues)
Amalia sings of a young woman longing for the return of a seabound lover, refusing to believe he will not return.
" I know my love that you never really left, everything around me says you're still here with me... and the sun got in my hearth..."
Photo taken in mile 6 beach with its fine sand dark brown created from ancient lava flow from Mt Cameroon.

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Hi Alberto,

amazing shot!the reflection is great. Great composition, beautiful capture.

composition*****
subject*****
colors and light*****
sharpness*****
overall aesthetics*****

well done!

Mahmut K.

Hello Alberto,
very nice photo of the very nice girl!
I like strong colors and great reflection.
Very romantic shot.
Julia

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  • [2007-01-17 11:44]

perfect, like a dream...I like the collors.

Hi Alberto,
Excellent composition, the picture in itself is poetry. Like the way you have used the reflections, beautiful colours.
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi

I love the collors,
but the model I'm already in love to ;-).
Just wonderered WhyU didnt use the zoom, then I saw the reflection in the water..

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  • Paolo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4701 W: 146 N: 9014] (39619)
  • [2007-01-17 12:11]

Ciao Alberto bel ritratto della ragazza, ben "posizionata" nella foto, lateralmente e con un bel riflesso nella pozza d'acqua.
bei colori e buoan qualità.
ottima nota con Amalia Rodrigues!

buona serata, ciao.

Ciao Alberto, splendida immagine di questa splendida ragazza, grandi riflessi, bellissima composizione con tutti gli elementi ottimamente collocati, bravo, Ciao Silvio

Hi Alberto, A wonderfully composed photo, a beautiful girl & an excellent reflection, superb colours & light, kind regards Wilson.

Alberto: Lovely image, both aesthitically and techically. Very natural light here and a beautiful model make this a very 'reflective' shot. regards, c

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  • miuky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 443 W: 48 N: 610] (3335)
  • [2007-01-17 13:48]

tanto ma tanto bello, composizione piu che perfetta, i colori vivaci e forti, acutezza superba e il resto e per voi ragazzi:))...ma a me piace il sorriso:)
saluti, M.

A very pretty girl in wonderful surroundings. Although the image is well composed and makes good use of the reflection I feel it needs a little more space above the girl's head. Other than that it is excellent. Good work Alberto.

Hola Alberto

Me gusta mucho esta toma por su composicion y por el reflejo que se produce. Los coloures tambien son muy buenos.

Por cierto, recibiste el WS que te envie??? Sergio

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  • Lix Gold Star Critiquer [C: 256 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-01-18 3:46]

Ciao Alberto
bellissima composizione...un gran bel lavoro!
Complimenti

Alessandro

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  • Angshu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4792 W: 166 N: 7340] (23874)
  • [2007-01-18 4:13]

Hi Alberto
The compo. is excellent with the reflections & the colour contrasts. Though I don't understand the poetry, I feel the poetry in the picture itself..well done
Regards
Angshu

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  • vincz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2999 W: 87 N: 5049] (17510)
  • [2007-01-18 4:27]

Oh qu'elle est belle, of comme on ressent si bien ce q'elle peut ressentir. Quele magnifique photo, elle a de si belles couleurs cette jeun femme devant cet ecrin de verdure. C'est magnifique, tres touchant. je suis touche, dans mes favorites!

Hey Alberto

Great comp and colors. Nice reflection. Very sharp.
Good capture of this beautiful girl.
Well done.
Ben

Bonsoir Alberto,
Une très belle image avec cette très belle jeune femme à l'attitude un peu gênée mais aussi très "sexy" et surtout en parfaite harmonie avec son environnement.
Bravo pour cette fraîcheur.
Amicalement.
max

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  • nika Gold Star Critiquer [C: 455 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-01-18 7:32]

Woaohh Alberto ! Que preciosa fotografía con delicados reflejos , la atmosfera bañada en amarillo , verde y tierra y la bella estampa de la guapísima chica . Muy bien la composición centrada en la presencia de la chica , dominada por el agua en esa visión de abajo para arriba . La nota musical es muy interesante aunque Amalia Rodrigues me suena mas a fado de pescadores nostalgicos y vino blanco . Yo le hubiera dedicado algo calido de la bossa más poética . En todo caso la foto con su varmonía musical me parece un lujo . Muy muy bonita .

Un abrazo

Ciao Alberto,
Complimenti, veramente un bel ritratto, stupendo il riflesso, i colori e l'inquadratura ... e la ragazza in giallo sorridente la rende perfetta ... sembra un sogno !
Ciao
Andrea

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  • adores Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2546 W: 48 N: 3520] (11351)
  • [2007-01-18 17:46]

Olá Alberto!
Está excelente!As cores, a luz, os reflexos. Depois, escolheu um excelente poema cantado pela Amália para a ilustrar.Muito bem escolhido, toda a foto revela poesia!
Cumprimentos, Anabela

Ciao Alberto!
peccato che non capisca niente di quello che hai scritto. Ma la foto è dolcissima bellissima.

Livia

wow what a beautiful girl here in such a beautiful compositin ...

a lovely pic ... the sarung she wears reminds me of bali

dan

Só a nota já é suficiente para este comentário o o grande smiley verde. Amália Rodrigues, nunca pensei ver no TE. Quanto à foto, pois está muito boa, com uma composição excelente e umas cores muito bonitas.

António

ciao Alberto!
che bella!!
con tanto di modella pure!!!
bravissimo!e ottimo gioco di riflesso!!
ciao!
Valeria

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  • vonp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 369 W: 0 N: 290] (2187)
  • [2007-01-19 6:54]

Ciao Alberto,
Devo veramente scusarmi per non aver ancora dato il mio commento su questo capolavoro.
Il commento è: senza parole...
Che intensità!!
Lei è bellissima (che non è poco!!) ed il suo sorriso discreto è un boato di gioia.
La composizione (bellissimo il riflesso) ed i colori fanno il resto.
Grazie Alberto per questa foto che sta per finire tra le mie preferite...
A presto
Paolo

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  • Flavia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1694 W: 96 N: 1827] (7436)
  • [2007-01-20 11:23]

Oi Alberto,

Que linda, a foto e a poesia. Nao conhecia a autora. Acomposicao e lindissima, o reflexo perfeito da bela moca refletido nas aguas.

Grande abraco

Flavia

Hola Alberto,

Tengo que felicitarte, creo que es una de tus mejores fotografías, me gusta la composición con la mujer situada en uno de los lados y su interesante reflejo, la luz está perfectamente equilibrada y la saturación de los colores es muy bella, la textura de la arena es preciosa, te felicito de nuevo por este gran trabajo.

Saludos
José

Alberto,
grande poesia in questa foto, femminilità, equilibrio.
Molto bella, complimenti.
Renzo

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  • parbo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1558 W: 15 N: 1714] (6316)
  • [2007-01-30 15:32]

Ciao Alberto,

Yellow dressed lady and her reflections are stunning in your photo. She seems so bashful while smiling and giving poses. You found a splendid surround and contrasts are spectacular with interesting story. Bellissimo. Congratulations.

Friendly Regards,

Ertugrul

Incredibly beuatiful and sensual photograph. The yellow is quite striking. Feels like a fantasy.

Ciao Alberto,
bell'immagine sopratutto grazie alla posa della tua modella: sei riuscito a catturarne la bellezza schiva e timida, con le mani intrecciate ed il suo dolce sorriso...
Ottimi i colori e la composizione che include il riflesso. Poi anche la bella canzone di Amalia...
Un super sorriso!
Luca
PS: Forza Chievo! :-)

Ciao Alberto.
Mamma che bella, la foto e anche la ragazza, sembra una Dea Nera.
Complimenti per i colori e l'effetto specchio.
Renzo

Bonjour Alberto
ta dernière vistie me donne l'occasion de regarder ta galerie.
Cette image est magnifique. Pleine de poésie et d'esthétique. La jeune fille est tres belle et j'aime bien le jeu des couleurs.
Je viens tout juste de rentrer d'une mission de 3 semaines à Phnom Penh.
Amicalement
Bertrand

Bonjour Alberto.
Très jolie photo avec de belles couleurs et de beaux reflets dans l'eau, une très belle composition,bien vu ..Michel

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  • atus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2278 W: 200 N: 4321] (14508)
  • [2007-02-18 13:50]

Ciao Alberto,
complimenti per la bellissima foto e per avere mantenuto il sangue freddo di fronte a tanta meraviglia. L'hai posizionata perfettamente nel riquadro e sei stato bravo anche ad includere il suo riflesso per intero. Ottimo il controllo della luce e i colori sono bellissimi e saturi. Hmm, a me il giallo non starebbe mai così bene, sulla mia pellaccia bianco-rosa...
Complimenti e buon lavoro!
Attila

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  • bebep Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 301 W: 510 N: 299] (1975)
  • [2007-02-23 20:11]

Ciao Alberto,
bella foto, bello il riflesso della ragazza sull'acqua, molto belli anche i colori, ma tra tutte queste cose belle, la ragazza vince ;-)

ti auguro un buon fine settimana

Giuseppe

what a foto! the clarity, the sharpness- all splendid!
bom trabalho. los angeles te manda um grande hello, doctor!
benedict

Bonjour Alberto,

Quel plaisir de revenir sur ta gallerie et de découvir cette trilogie de photos qui sont un hymne à la vie, à la diversité, de par l'originalité, le mélange des couleurs, ...

Celle-ci est particulière réussie par le contraste des couleurs, le reflet dans l'eau, la cadrage...

Encore, Encore, ....

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  • hajle Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 67 W: 3 N: 41] (1087)
  • [2007-04-13 17:11]

truly lovely picture!!! very sexy model, great reflection in the water, colours and cool atmosphere make that shot one of the best that i've ever seen on TE;
it's also one of my favourites:)
greetings!
slawek

Great photo - compostion, color, subject with the yellow against green background, womans stance. It's all really good.

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  • Ertan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 64 N: 247] (2973)
  • [2007-05-14 18:03]

Hi Alberto
Wooww.amazing shot!the reflection is great.!!
Like a dream,I like strong colors and composition.
It's my favourites!
Very well done
Best regards
Ertan

HI alberto
voici une belle image avec un trés joli modèle
super reflets
amicalement dilane

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  • LamCam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 600 W: 65 N: 478] (2392)
  • [2007-07-29 13:29]

Hello Alberto
Lovely composition and glowing colour.This shot is full of happiness!
Thank You
Best Wishes Maggie

Hola Alberto, si, la playa de mi foto es muy linda, pero esta playa es más completa! jaja.

Un abrazo

Yuri

Ciao Alberto
I´ve seen from your TE profile that you are a "WORLD traveler".
A magnificent picture and note!
Can you understand portuguese so well as what it says in that Amalia Rodrigues´song?
Great compo! Parabéns! Congratulations
From RECIFE-Brazil,
Nivaldo

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1944 W: 171 N: 1922] (8464)
  • [2008-01-23 16:47]

Hi Alberto, A fine composition with the model well positioned. The photo has strong impact in part by the clear reflection off wet sand. A very good photograph. TFS. Murray.

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