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Critiques [Translate]

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• Gustaw (21576)
• [2006-05-19 9:41]

Hallo friend!
Good title! Interesting face. Good colours and good contrast.
Marek

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• zou (221)
• [2006-05-19 18:57]
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Hi clara
amazing smile, it looks as dream movie scene :), this why I convert it to B/W, , I hope you will agree with me

Cheers

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Zou

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• gebala (0)
• [2006-05-27 5:08]

hello, sweet photo, great point of view, I like this composition:) nice cute children:D
rgs

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• kajspice (4519)
• [2006-06-16 16:43]

Hi Clara,

This one almost works for me...I think the cropped girl in the background is wonderful...a really good presence.

However, I feel the boy is just too close to the camera for it to work for me. Is it cropped really close? perhaps a looser crop may help its appreciation?