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In the company of cheerful ladies


In the company of cheerful ladies
Photo Information
Copyright: Doug Chaffee (DougC) (47)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-10
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon 70-300mm IS USM
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/50 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-05 15:23
Viewed: 1211
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
These women were returning home from market at the end of the day, near Ndu, Northwest Province.
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  • SamB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 497 W: 58 N: 418] (1944)
  • [2006-09-05 15:55]

i like the idea on this one, but the composition doesn't work for me very well. Maybe it would have been a little bit better to have taken the picture from a little bit farther right, putting the nearest woman farther to the left (maybe halfway to two thirds of the way farther left than she is now), and showing us more of the crowd. That way the narrow DOF would have greater impact. Currently the left side of the picture feels kind of wasted.

Thanks!
sam

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