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Student
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Copyright: Murat Duzyol (muratd) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 4 N: 42] (3454)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-19
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 30D, Canon 16-35 mm f 2,8 L-USM
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Afrique [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-02-05 2:51
Viewed: 860
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo was taken in Titao in Burkina Faso.
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Hi Murat,
This was the frame with lot of potentials. Grate composition. But I am afraid lack of sharpness is a major issue here. Is this frame is recomposed with cropping?
Biju

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  • liskit (142)
  • [2008-02-05 3:44]

Kompozisyon ve cocugun yuzundeki ifade gercekten cok guzel. Tahtadaki renkli yazi da duvardaki rengi alip resme dagitmis gibi, cok guzel bir nuans katmis. Cocogun yuzu biraz daha net olsa imis daha da super olurmus. Tebrikler, paylastiginiz icin tesekkurler! Afrika'da gezmeyi seven Turkler oldugunu gormek ayrica sevindirici.

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  • padeg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 75 N: 62] (421)
  • [2008-02-05 5:34]

Hi Murat,

The position of the second boy in the background, with his head just in line above the foreground boy, is a little disturbing to my opinion. Also it is too bad that the whole image is not sharper than that.

Anyway that image has also some very good points I think : The ambiance is well rendered, it can be felt immediatly. I like the light and the color tones also.

Interesting image.
Have a nice day,
Pascal.

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