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Copyright: Eric LE PARC (eleparc) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2494 W: 86 N: 2107] (24014)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-22
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70, Nikon 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 DX VR
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Portraits of my definition, Afrique [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-05-14 6:21
Viewed: 950
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
stopover for lunch in the village of Boungou, in the Naouri province.
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To dolin: Merci fredeleparc 1 07-13 06:10
To vapours: thanks for the feedbackeleparc 4 05-18 07:15
To michiels: the perfect compo for meeleparc 1 05-17 06:09
To AmiBe: j'adore tes scènes d'Afrique...eleparc 1 05-15 19:40
To MiguelP: graciaseleparc 1 05-15 13:37
To nicoz: Etrange cette photoeleparc 3 05-15 06:09
To faubry: wseleparc 2 05-14 08:54
To cobraphil8: bon wseleparc 2 05-14 07:33
To luisafonso: thankseleparc 1 05-14 07:05
To Saule: the highest level of street photography!eleparc 1 05-14 06:36
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Bonjour Eric...

This is a really nice portrait. The colours are really subtle yet caught my eye.

Perhaps not the most complex composition, but it works really nicely. The mood in the image is very quiet, yet she looks slightly troubled...I think with your camera, but this does not spoil the picture.

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  • Saule Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 71 W: 0 N: 32] (287)
  • [2007-05-14 6:31]
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Eric,
This is a great work! You didn't have to show more people, or other objects. With this minimalistic shot you were able to let us feel the atmosphere of that village. And this in my eyes is the highest level of street photography. Lovely!
Saule.

Beautiful once again Eric! Man, you last shots are nothing but spectacular. The tones are very good and the turquoise blues of the dress are a perfect match for the light earthy tones on the background. The light over her skin is once again very nice. I would like to see her just a little more to the right, but I guess you couldn't move the pov to the left because of some distracting elements close to the left edge. Great photo indeed.

Salut Eric,
cette photo dégage une atmosphère particulière, par contre je ne pense pas que la couleur apporte quelque chose en plus... J'ai donc essayé un petit passage en N&B pour voir.
Bonne semaine à toi
philippe

encore une tres belle photo Eric, je suppose que tu as volontairement voulu prendre les chiffres, c est pour cela qu elle est centree? j ai fait un petit WS juste pour rendre moins vert.. bravo
bises
francine

Eric,
Wonderful colours you have here. An excellent portrait. Simple but it works very well.

Cheers
Peter

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  • delkoo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3693 W: 235 N: 4744] (23427)
  • [2007-05-14 10:03]

bonjour eric,
j'aime bien cette composition a la fois simple mais efficace, l'attitude de la femme est bonne et la couleur de la robe ressort bien sur ce fond de couleur terre.

didier

Gorgeous one again, dear Eric. The way she sits is truly unique, something rarely found in the Western world. The colours again are marvellous, her light turquoise dress shines in front of the earthy colours of her place.
Superb composition
Ciao!
sasa

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  • nicoz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 248 W: 14 N: 303] (1943)
  • [2007-05-15 4:57]
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Salut Eric!
Etrange cette photo. Elle me et un peu mal a l'aise. Son regard pas vraiment accueillant, ses epaule qui montrent des signes de fatigue, ses jambes ecartees et ses 2 mains entre ses cuisses, etc... Enfin moi le premier truc qui me vient en tete c'est une femme violee... Pas tres rejouissant tout ca...
Un peu surexposee a mon gout (cf la robe sur ses genous, ses tongues)
Une photo qui demenage Eric! Ca me plait enormement, enfin... si je puis-dire!
Nicolas

A nice image Eric. I would have been inclined to do more of a closeup of the girl, but I think what you have done here works well as it gives her a bit more space and isolation. Both the blue and the graffiti work well here.

I saw this photo just a little bit after you uploaded but at that moment I thought I need sometime to enjoy it because I love it very much, one the best of this travel. This loneliness, it´s like all Africa for me. Like waiting for an answer about what´s going to happen next with them. Take care Eric.

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  • AmiBe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2067 W: 370 N: 1681] (19494)
  • [2007-05-15 16:47]
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Hello Eric,
j'adore tes scènes d'Afrique...
Superbes les couleurs sur celle-ci et un bel exemple de nonchalance...
Pour moi c'est ta version la meilleur.
a+

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  • dilane Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 654 W: 135 N: 1073] (8977)
  • [2007-05-16 16:15]

bonsoir eric
une compo comme je les aime: simple, monochrome avec juste une touche de couleur, points forts bien à leurs places
super
amicalement dilane

hello Eric,

I like this one very much. It's so "simple", nothing to much or to less in the photo. Great colours. The problem with "african"photos is that often there is too much in one photo and here it is the perfect compo for me :)
greetings, inn

ciao Eric!
bella composizione dai toni caldi e un bel contrasto con il vestito verde della donna..
La sua espressione è un pò riste a dire il vero...

Ottimo risultato!

ciao!
Valeria
Come è stato questo viaggio? com'è questo paese?

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  • Luan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2009 W: 246 N: 1894] (15871)
  • [2007-05-17 15:47]

Aime bien celle la cadrage impecc avec de bons elements qui en fait une bonne image !
Les couleurs sable sont tops

Salut Eric,
On se demande ce que signifie son expression sévère. J'aime bien sa pose relaxée, sa robe bleue, et surtoutr l'ambience formée par cette étendue de murs de boue ochre.
Bonne fin de semaine - Izzet

Celle là je l'adoore, en toute simplicité, moment intemporel de cette femme posée là, qui te regarde sans vraiment te regarder, cette fois la compo me plait vraiment, très chouette

One of the best AFRICAN portraits on TE in recent memory...
And the word AFRICAN has to be accentuated here...
For, I believe there is nowhere in the world that aura of helplessness to be existent as obvious as in Africa….
What a continent…? What a society…?
Oh, well… It makes our planet earth much more exciting place to live within…
Very good shot, Eric…True shot of true Africa…

Thanks, pal

george

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  • dolin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2627 W: 447 N: 1494] (15647)
  • [2007-07-13 5:08]
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une petite dernière...après faut quand meme que je bosse un peu ;)
rien de spécial à dire, mais j'aime bien. voilà ciao ;)
Non mais cette miss seule, sa position, son attitude, un côté triste, un côté mystérieux, un côté "je m'en foutiste", un côté inquiet....et pis son habit qui pète là au milieu....et la petite touche finale avec ce 189 peint sur le mur...
Bien bien sympa ;)
Salut, bon week-end
fred

She sits as if she has all the troubles of the world on her shoulders, maybe she has, certainly not a feel good shot, but it says a lot. The light is lovely, and the tones earthy

Hi Eric,
such a strange atmosphere here, i do like it, perfect street daily life scene..
Colours are great as well.
Nice sunday
Vero

She looks unhappy, but the place seems exotic..... Very good! Lucky you to see so much of the world. People never believe me here in the USA, when I say I went somewhere else. You are amazing!

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