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Critiques [Translate]
- elihesamian
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5496 W: 231 N: 4186]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(25807) - [2008-01-18 12:29]
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Hello Jean Pierre,
a good portraits shot in a green atmosphere you captured and posted,I like the way that those youngs don't look at you,I did a simple workshop for you,hope you don't mind,Thanks for sharing,
Best Regards
M
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- rstouffl
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 41 W: 5 N: 18]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif)
(152) - [2008-01-18 12:37]
Bonsoir Jean-Pierre,
J'aime le point de vue et le mariage des couleurs. Le centrage des enfants convient bien à leur alignement et à la direction de leur regard. L'arrière plan, un peu trop net ne nuit pourtant pas à la lisibilité de l'image, probablement grace au contraste des couleurs.
Bavo.
René
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- vikous
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 129 W: 4 N: 328]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-n-g.gif)
(2004) - [2008-01-18 12:43]
Hello Jean Pierre!
I'm just watching one of the BBC series called Tribes with Bruce Parry and this looks exactly like what i see on DVD, beautiful photo from Africa! I like this photo a lot, what a nice encounter!
TFS, good luck*
viktor
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- holmertz
(4287)
- [2008-01-18 12:49]
Hello jean Pierre,
I like the way the boys and the donkey are completely surrounded by grass and bushes of various shades of green. I also like the boys' attentive looks. I fine snapshot of this brief encounter.
Regards,
Gert
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- Priam1966
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 92 W: 14 N: 80]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-g.gif)
(822) - [2008-01-19 2:44]
Bonjour,
Le sujet est trés bien choisi j'avoue que je le trouve un peu trop centré je pense que le workshop propose offre un meilleur cadrage si en plus il y avait la brousse sur la gauche je trouve que cela donnerai une dynamique par rapport à leur regard. d'autre part les couelurs manquent un peu d'intensité.
Chris
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- rbellemare
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 36 W: 5 N: 8]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-n.gif)
(112) - [2008-01-19 4:19]
Bonjour Jean-Pierre, merci de ta visite dans ma gallerie. J'aime beaucoup cette photo. Ces jeunes au milieu de cette verdure donne une ambiance du tonnere.
Bravo
Jean,
the placement of the subject centrally in this snap doesn't allow any relief to the onlooker so I have cropped it & posted a PP'ed version for your acceptance or rejection with a :)
Hope you like it; just we are all here to help you out for your journey towards better photography
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- kwekwekan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 66 W: 10 N: 45]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif)
(292) - [2008-01-25 8:43]
Hi Jean Pierre,
Interesting to see the workshops on this photo, but I like your original composition just as much if not more than the others. In your version the two are very well situated amongst the foliage & you can see the donkey is pulling a cart. Nice shades of green too.
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- tinuta23 (51)
- [2008-02-15 2:02]
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This is a very good photo, very nice colours, very warm. I would though tried to put the subject at the right or left, not in the center, but still it's a good photo for me.