FYI: You don't need to do have the date stamped onto the images themselves. The camera automatically records that information inside the image in what's known as the EXIF data. Here's what TE sees in your EXIF data for "Augusta":
Augusta EXIF
Also, please can I suggest you don't post messages like this asking for critiques - the best way to ensure you get critiques is to write more of them yourself :)
But how to write critiques? Here's my suggestion: Look at the images you love. Examine them closely. Work out why they're special to you. Don't copy them, but instead try and learn from them.
That's why I write critiques, to try and find out what part of an image appeals to me - in finding that, I learn something - and hopefully the photographer I've critiqued learns something too.
Of course there are technical aspects to consider too - but that's the easier part, a book or a course can teach you that!