joso 2012-05-08 10:03
good play with light and shadow
give more attention to the horizont, try to get it horizontal, it is a bit tilted to the left
take two sheets of paper, play a bit, and "crop" so, that you have just 1/3 of the space behinde them, and do the same with the sky, from the top
does it look better? they are moving forward, to the left, so you should give them space...