Critiques

zips (1941) 2008-03-02 20:12

Strong photograph, the kind trek earth needs more of. Interesting line and composition as well as black to white gradation.

Notes would be great.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2008-03-02 19:54

This is a fair depiction but I would have liked you to move up about 20 feet and work off of the reflection in the puddle and depict the facial expressions of the people a bit more from a lower POV.

Great Job,
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2008-03-02 19:44

I think you had the right idea with the colors and such but I would have liked to see a lower POV and a wider shot. As it is, the photograph needs your explanation to tell the viewer what is happening.

Great Job,
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2008-03-02 0:58

This boy is getting older as he has been the subject of many photographs. It is probably time to figure out who he is and what his circumstances are and how we all might be able to help him of find him assistance if his conditions warrant it.

Thank you for reminding us all about this boy. He has a name and I suppose we should find out what it is.

Great Job,
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2007-10-17 0:49

I like this scene but maybe the door is a bit too centered. It is too bad a human wasn't around to add a bit more to this photo but there is no wishing in photography.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2007-10-17 0:42

I agree with Dakowicz on the framing but it could be cropped to change that, just move her left in the frame a bit and you will have it.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2007-10-17 0:36

Good sillhouette effect, bokeh and light. Well seen and shot.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2007-10-17 0:32

I like this photo but the earing should be monochromatic as well IMHO. You are one of these photographers who don't get much attention here but your photos are right up there...and the cambodian collection is nice.

Great Job
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2007-10-17 0:24

The workshop version blows out the details of the sky but this shot is the essence of Luang Prabang. Maybe a bit less saturation but an interesting capture.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

zips (1941) 2007-10-17 0:17

This is a nice photo. Since there is so much light flooding the wall to the worshippers right, you may have tried to move up perhaps 1 pilar and to the left a bit to capture an interesting sillhouette effect, or you may have that shot I don't know. I would like to see that with a low POV.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

Great Job.
Aloha, JB