Critiques

ywho79 (382) 2009-02-17 15:40

From the looks of it, this photo is somewhat too 'convenient'. THe horizon is slanted, colors a bit dull and from what I see on my monitor it's not sharp as well.

But nevertheless, you did well in framing and composition. A simple composition keeps the photo focused on the subject and is pleasing.

Good job and keep shooting more Raquel

ywho79 (382) 2008-08-31 3:10

cool shot man. I've always wanted to shoot this building but seems like they don't allow cameras?

ywho79 (382) 2007-06-29 2:37

Crop out the rather useless bottom area and try to avoid the red lamp in the future.

ywho79 (382) 2006-11-19 5:03

Exposure is correct, composition is good enough. In summary... BAGUS! (Good)

ywho79 (382) 2006-11-11 19:01

Good job Daniel!! This is National Geographic quality!

ywho79 (382) 2006-11-11 19:01

This is beautiful, but if you allow me to nitpick, I feel that the on-center composition is not pleasing. It creates too much empty sky at the sides. Also, the little black triangular shaped thing at the bottom right corner could be cropped out as it contributes little to the photo.

With that done, I do enjoy looking at this photo.

ywho79 (382) 2006-07-26 20:43

Hey man... I like this pic. Depressing, but a nice pic nevertheless..

ywho79 (382) 2006-07-26 20:42

This is good. May I ask why did you set it to F/22 ?

ywho79 (382) 2005-12-02 21:04

Very nice Ewan... wonderful exposure

ywho79 (382) 2005-11-05 4:10

Oh man! This picture really touched my heart. These kids are doing this for money? Or being forced to by their parents? A good picture well composed and expsosed. Thanks for sharing this wonderful picture & Selamat Hari Raya!