Critiques

yellowhorse (8) 2004-11-03 15:21

Wonderful. The scene is like one from some fairy tale. Even the bright sky in the middle is just right.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-23 12:20

Good catch. I think croping the picture (mostly the upper side) might improve the picture and give it a panoramic effect.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-23 12:13

Great shot. I guess this is the turtle version of elephants line walk.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-23 10:06

Good picture, but the perspective might have been better if the water fall in the bottom was included more towards the center). btw, there is the impression of a face made by the shadows near the middle of the top half of the water fall.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-23 9:54

Very nice shot. Gives me the impression of aiming for the sky.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-23 9:18

Great perspective. From our proximity to the earth we tend to forget how overwhelming the sky is. This shot really dwarfs the city and gives the impression that most of the skyscrapers can be easily swallowed by one of these clouds. I also get the impression of dynamic clouds moving in the sky with grandeur.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-21 7:37

I think this picture could have been improved if the subject of attention for the police was also shown (the game) even if partially, while maintaining the focus and attention on the police. As it is, you can hardly tell the context of their situation. and the focus seems to draw attention to the far police men than to the group of them. You might have been too close to them for the shot.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-21 7:27

Very peculiar. Though it's a little unfocused, what draws the attention is the oddness of the house location. I think it might have been improved if the functionality (being a bar) was also displayed on the picture.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-21 7:15

Good work. The focus on the flower seems to send a symbolic sign of a cheerful atmosphere between the people without the need for seeing the expressions on their faces.

yellowhorse (8) 2004-10-18 17:57

Very nice colors, though I don't know if the sky could have been captured better. I like the sharp contrasts that give details to the picture, it gives me the impression of a wild place.