Critiques

  shabnamlin (98) 2008-02-28 23:13

Jim,

The rock is rough while the wave is soft. Great contrary. But I don't think that the the cloud is necessary. Posted another version in the workshop.

Emma

shabnamlin (98) 2007-10-11 20:16

Jim,

I like the atmosphere presenting by this photo very much. The curving path passes the green grass, the big old tree stands by the road. All are so fimilar, but quiet.

Still have a suggestion to you. If I were you, I would leave the sky more space to emphasize the old tree, and shorten the foreground a little bit. How do you think?

shabnamlin (98) 2007-07-02 2:20

Jim,

This one really impressed me! The colour, the angle, the shape,,,, amazing!

Emma

shabnamlin (98) 2007-02-12 0:24

Jim,

Wow~~~ Such a nice place. Lights are twinkling in the quiet and peaceful mountain town. A new day is coming.

Well done.
Emma

shabnamlin (98) 2007-02-04 23:24

Hi Rajiv,

This is a nice portrait, smiling in the sunshine. Only see the happy and innocent faces. Did you feel sad when you saw them?

Regards, Emma

shabnamlin (98) 2006-11-29 19:45

Hi Sven,

Looks like a quiet place and good for chichat. Where is it exactly?

Emma

shabnamlin (98) 2006-08-14 20:38

Hi Pauz,

等了好久你又重出江湖了~~~這張是晚上拍的嗎?那麼晚了還有雲瀑哦?右上角是星星留下的痕跡嗎?

Like you photos very much. Hope you could post more to show the beauty of this disturbing land. Thanks for sharing.

Emma

shabnamlin (98) 2006-07-02 22:30

Jim,
Very nice compostion. This picture caught the feeling of summer voaction. Well done.
Emma

  shabnamlin (98) 2006-06-25 23:09

Jim,
The big rock was disturbing and attracting too much attention.
If the topic was the big rock, no special point of view. If the topic was the beautiful scenery, probably without the big rock standing at the front would be better.
But the sea looked so gentel. Thanks for sharing.
Emma

shabnamlin (98) 2006-06-12 21:54

Hi Mike,
Nice imagine which portrayed the school life very vividly. The girl in the middle carried a big schoolbag. I was wondering what she put inside the bag? Was it too heavy for her?
Regards, Emma