Critiques

rakeman (21) 2003-04-25 7:53

Reflections are great but I would have cropped the picture to the right to avoid the building edge. The cars at the bottom disturb a bit too but are "uncroppable" as the two open windows would then be too close to the bottom edge of the image.

Another issue that is often unavoidable is to see the interior of the building as in this case behind the front mast of the ship.

Otherwise very nice!

rakeman (21) 2003-04-22 14:19

Is this part of something else? I love this kind of picture. Why is this kid reacting like that?

Nice feel for the texture.

rakeman (21) 2003-04-21 17:04

I like the way the shadow is projected onto the wall. More saturation and sharpness as well as a slight clockwise rotation should improve the picture.

rakeman (21) 2003-04-21 17:01

Great display of pattern and one gets a genuine feeling for the texture. This leaves enough room for imagination of what the rest of the roof looks like as well as the environment.

rakeman (21) 2003-04-11 8:14

I will not repeat what the others have written apart from that it is a great shot. I was wondering what difference it would have made had the people not been there?

rakeman (21) 2003-04-10 16:38

Being Danish, I know your feelings quite well - it can be quite disappointing as the mermaid is small and there are usually loads of tourists hanging about. But then, what exactly did you expect? As with most monuments, there is quite a gap between postcards and reality. I personally find her very charming.

I would actually have left the refinery as well as the tourist boat in the picture. Thus, you would have left the picture to express yor disappointment rather than to have to put it in words.

rakeman (21) 2003-04-09 9:36

This really makes me want to move back to London. Although the picture has room for improvement, it catches the atmosphere very well indeed. Just like being there!

Maximum points for the fond memories!

Irakli

rakeman (21) 2003-04-04 11:38

I like the dynamic of the grid and the contrast. But the gondolas/ cabins seem to defy gravity, which is a bit disturbing!