Critiques

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-09-01 4:52

Wow, that photo has potential. If it just wasn't blurred. It is becouse of too long exposition time taken from hand, with quite long focal length. I think you shoult use tripod, or try to stabilize the camera some other way. Or take picture with closer focal length and then crop it - but it won't look the same. Excellent colors and composition though

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-09-01 4:44

Hi. Interesting photo - I like composition of colors and tones. Looks a bit soft though. Maybe some postprocessing would help - you could try Unsharp Mask filter in PS for sharpening. Photos from D70 are a bit soft overall, and do need sharpening. Regards

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-09-01 4:32

Hi. I like yours composition - it is very interesting. One thing that I don't like is the outburned right part of photo - obviosly too contrast was too high for tonal range of the camera. Maybe you could try to underexpose it and then use PS to brighten up the left side? Another good idea for difficult light conditions is to shot in RAW and then postprocess it in PS

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-08-05 8:48

Brilliant. I like photos like that, showing some contrast between different people. Or between what global village is trying to sell us all, and normal people, or these from outside of "cool" part of society. The only disturbing thing is this head on the left edge of the pict. Technically great, as usual.

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-07-23 10:09

Fajna kompozycja. Kwiaty na pierwszym planie dodają zdjęciu dużo głębi. Piękne kolory i co tu dużo mówić sam widok też. Pozdrawiam

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-07-23 10:07

Good picture. I like that figures of trees and sky are well-balanced. That's for composition. Exposition is also very good.

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-05-26 16:13

Very cool reflection - looks like some kind of painting. Claude Monet perhaps. Not bad at all, wish I managed to do something like this one day.

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-05-26 16:09

Great composition and subject... wish I was there instead of sitting behind the desk day after day. I can imagine the feel of drops of water on the face - as I see you had some on your filter. Looks a bit noisy though, like it was scan from a print, or something. But great anyway.

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-05-26 16:03

Very nice diagonal perspective. I also like the contrast light and the great greens. The background looks very nice, good example of how good the kit lens of D70 is. Good work

rafal_bergman (91) 2004-05-26 16:00

Looks rather like a mosquito than just a plain fly... I wouldn't like to see mosquito that big. Cool shot... how did you make it freeze?