Critiques

  nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-26 10:42

Welcome to TE Tropelios.
Dont take this critique as a bad thing. First og all I think you should write a note with your Photo. Second straightend the horizon. Third Crop Closer, make the boy and the kite fill a bit more in your photo.
Come again...
Cheers
Allan

nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-20 19:39

Very artistic, at first glanse I thought it was a lightbulp.
Nice composition and colouring.
Cheers

nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-20 6:22

Or you could have named it "Dancing With Gollum".
Excellent composition. You could have made a Note though, write a note and I'll give you the last point.
Cheers
allan

nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-19 20:00

Could be a great B&W too, the brown tone becomes it good

nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-19 19:32

Hello Will.
A photo hat puts our life in perspective.
A little more contrast would help the washed out background as Steven wrote earlier.
Cheers
Allan

nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-19 19:26

The intensity and focus in her eyes, the background blur, makes this portrait excellent. Works well in B&W
Well done Francine

nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-18 19:02

I know the Icefjord very well, living in Greeland. The "problem" with you photo is that you need an object in your photo for scale, ie a boat for example. See my photo from the Icefjord Ilulissat.
You need to straighten the horizon, the colours needs a little less cyan.
Still a lovely photo and a lovely place.
Regards
Allan

nielsenallan (524) 2007-05-18 18:45

Wonderful clear colours. The contrast between the dry desert and their clothes. Beautiful girls too, the are present in the photo and aware of you taking the photo.
Well done, wish it was mine.
Allan

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nielsenallan (524) 2006-10-22 6:00

"Dynamic and Action Packed" photo you have here Rabani. Would have been perfect if the boys faces were more visible, but you cant be lucky everytime.
Composition, colors, sharpness, all very good, my kind of photo

nielsenallan (524) 2006-10-21 16:27

I agree with all TE members, just one "but", the waterline is not straight, minor thing, but I think you would agree....

Again, a beautiful Photo, water, rocks,Landscape, your speciality