Critiques

kinsonchan (333) 2006-08-18 11:52

very good DOF,POV and contrast of the colours (red, bluce). The girls looks like realy walking on the water.

kinsonchan (333) 2006-08-03 4:54

very good shoot Chris. I seems that this lonely painter is doing a job that will take forever.

Technical: the upper part seesm too dark compare to the whte. If the man is dressing other colour ohter than white will be better. :)

cheers.

kinsonchan (333) 2006-08-03 2:42

very good capture Nhat. She is almost crying out.... you capture the story of this little girl. Good DOF as well.

kinsonchan (333) 2006-07-29 6:55

very good shoot Ryan. I like you to capture the eyes contact from the player. The movement of him and the wave shows so dynamic on the action. Good shoot.

kinsonchan (333) 2006-07-21 3:22

James,

I am attracked by the colour of this photo. All the buildings are in red.

The bridge is outstanding in this picture. It well connect to places.

I recommend you to notice on the horizontal line on the sky. Perhaps you can crop the 1/4 of the picture from the top will be better.

cheers,
Kinson

kinsonchan (333) 2006-07-10 10:53

very good capture. The light control is good. It also shows the mood of the whole environment.

welcome to TE.

cheers
Kinson

kinsonchan (333) 2006-07-10 10:49

very nice colour and pattern.

good shoot. :)

kinsonchan (333) 2006-07-09 12:06

HI Elaine,

I wonder why there is still no points for this photo. The colour is good. Exposure is good. It has the mood of sunset.

Some points you may consider to improve. The interest point (ie the sun) is better to put on the golden point. It is at the center now to make the picture less interest.

You may also want to wait the ship close to the sun or has a better shape against the darness. It can has a perfect outline.

have fun.. cheers.
Kinson

kinsonchan (333) 2006-07-09 12:01

Good shoot. I like the light you control and the frame.

The composition also tell the story. She has plenty of fishes for sell.

kinsonchan (333) 2006-07-09 11:57

very good capture. It shows the happy of the boy and he is little bit shy.